:: Hello from the Critique Club ::
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Well, I'm sure you knew this wouldn't win any awards - but your image does have character!
It was a nice take on the challenge with good DOF and some effort made to use some directional light. Taking it seriously, I would offer the following by way of improvement:
> cleaner background
> get in even closer to lose more of the context
> a touch more lighting towards the front to pick up a bit more detail
Hope this helps. : )
Jon |