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Challenge: Parts (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Olympus C-765UZ
Location: Johannesburg, South Africa
Date: Oct 2, 2004
Aperture: 3.5
ISO: 64
Shutter: 1/250s
Galleries: Urban
Date Uploaded: Oct 5, 2004

My first submission to DP Challenge. We've all got to start somewhere, I guess.

Post: Remove slight green cast, rotated and cropped.

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Votes: 274
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/12/2004 12:05:59 PM
the light looks a little uninspiring here
10/09/2004 03:56:47 PM
there's no subject, needs color at least
10/09/2004 12:03:42 AM
Good abstact but maybe could use a focal point... Nicely exposed and good use of monochromatic .
10/08/2004 03:01:38 PM
Terrific repetition. I would love to see a version "2" with the top edge cropped with just the tiles showing and see what that looks like, also. Good job!! Crisp lines, great lighting.
10/08/2004 01:31:15 AM
looks like a hot and hazy day, very good pattern though...i'd like to see it without the roof line
10/07/2004 08:20:21 PM
Perhaps this would have been better if the whole picture has been just the clay shingles - I find the ridge a little distracting. still, I like it.
10/07/2004 07:25:00 PM
A really great photograph! I like the tone and angle of view, the focus is sharp. Like how the roof tiles appear to move when I scroll it for viewing. Fantastic lighting/shadows. The only thing I would have liked to see done differently, maybe, is to crop out the top roof line. It stops my eyes, is jarring. Then again, I know that leaving it in is the only way I would be able to identify the subject. Very well done!
10/07/2004 02:50:45 PM
sky is distracting... nice idea
10/07/2004 10:05:58 AM
Hurts my eyes, but i like it!!
10/07/2004 04:54:30 AM
Thats good quality shot and good idea... wonder if you had to leave white part of sky.
10/06/2004 11:03:31 PM
I think perhaps crop that cut off the roof line, leaving just the pattern of tile, may have worked better. Eye-catching design though!
10/06/2004 11:20:19 AM
Cool patterns. Cropping out the sky might make it better though.
10/06/2004 10:44:23 AM
I would crop to the front edge of the top row of bricks.
great pattern
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10/06/2004 08:22:29 AM
Nice repeating effect.
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10/06/2004 02:06:41 AM
Nice geographic patterns. I think this shot might look better with a bit more contrast, but it still came out really nice. Good job.
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