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Challenge: Classic Novels (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-650/T4i Rebel
Location: Spare bedroom aka soon-to-be baby nursary
Date: Oct 15, 2013
Aperture: f3.2
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/100
Date Uploaded: Oct 15, 2013

Hi

I'm please with the overall effect and wanted a lot of negative space. The only thing I couldn't achieve was light into the top of the bowl and fore-arms.

I had a lamp on the floor with a towel wrapped around so to direct the light upward. Black background. Aperture circa 3 and shutter of 1/100 and 100iso.

Editing steps were minimal. Blacked out the visible background. Colour/sharp adjust.

Thanks

Statistics
Place: 57 out of 86
Avg (all users): 5.5049
Avg (commenters): 5.4211
Avg (participants): 5.6000
Avg (non-participants): 5.4444
Views since voting: 455
Views during voting: 214
Votes: 103
Comments: 20
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10/22/2013 10:38:28 AM
i'm really having a hard job judging this one.
the fact it's just the hands and bowl lend to the fact that it could be anybody, but the lack of 'more' leaves me feeling like it's me with my hands on the bowl, asking for more of the image.
an 8 is all you get, now go and be happy with it
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10/22/2013 12:50:18 AM
Waaaay too dark for me.
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10/21/2013 07:42:02 PM
4...Oliver, a little more information if you please...or maybe some levels adjustment, then maybe I would have given you more.
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10/21/2013 06:46:15 PM
Lovely. The hands look rather well cared for, but I suppose 'poor' hands are hard to come by on short notice.

I think it fits the challenge very well, and is reasonably executed.

The big issue I have here is the lighting, not only is it a bit too harsh (Chiaroscuro is good, but only to a point), but the entire midtone range is quite low-key and the highlights are a bit low as well.

6 for meeting the challenge well, but not quite the processing that I would have preferred.
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10/21/2013 03:17:18 PM
Nice low key image. I like the lighting and details too. 6.
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10/21/2013 09:52:30 AM
too dark i would have explored more with the light. like this i try too hard to understand 5
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10/18/2013 11:39:35 PM
I like the idea of the image. The lighting looks good on this one. Very minimalist in this. Seems like it needs something else.

Gave it a 6
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10/18/2013 09:48:37 PM
A famous quote risks letdown when the image doesn't fit. Here the hands lack the wear and tear of an urchin, and without a suitable face or at least some hint of one, the image is incomplete. Nice try with the bowl and hands which might be enough for some viewers. 5
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10/18/2013 12:56:50 AM
Wonderful shot, the darkness and negative space really add to this photo. Hope to see it do well. 9
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10/18/2013 12:40:58 AM
I like this
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10/17/2013 09:11:42 PM
I like the idea of interpreting this literally and abstractly at the same time. But I must confess I am bothered by what looks like a nice teak salad bowl - at once too specific to be abstract, too large and inappropriate to be authentic. Everything counts in a picture, and is more easily counted in a minimal one. 5
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10/17/2013 08:08:06 PM
An odd look, I feel I want to turn it upside down for some strange reason. The low key approach is ok, but the emptiness above the bowl leaves me feeling just that, not as an effect of the topic, but there is something lacking in the composition. Probably, because they are a man's hands you were without a boyish model, a low key face would have completed the picture for me.5.
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10/17/2013 08:00:29 PM
Nice idea, and nice bowl, but I'm feeling that it's too dark. Perhaps it's the heavy shadows between the fingers -- because I like the idea of the back of the bowl and the person disappearing. -6-
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10/17/2013 04:32:26 PM
The photo is too dark and contrived for my taste. The large area of black on top just makes it seem like you ran out of props and costumes. In general, I think if your photo is going to be largely black, it feels contrived to have one portion be well lit and the rest completely invisible. 2
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10/17/2013 10:21:51 AM
I like what you've chosen to do with this shot... but I feel it's just too dark.
Gave it a 5
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10/17/2013 09:02:57 AM
A good idea, but the plastic bowl and well groomed hands don't tie to the story well. Would like to see more subject, in a way that lends to the story. I can faintly see burn lines around the hands and forearms as well, but that may be this monitor so take that with a grain of salt. 3
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10/17/2013 06:36:38 AM
Too dark,hackneyed poor image.2.
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10/16/2013 08:37:29 PM
Dickens-iana , only that the bowl had to be made of metal and the hands of a young boy and not so delicate and clean!
Nevertheless, a nice image - a square crop might be even better
7
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10/16/2013 08:23:24 PM
Yup, you nailed it. Lovely take on the book, and so PERFECTLY executed with your choice of light and minimal subject in focus/view. Very sparse and poignant!
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10/16/2013 02:54:16 PM
Well done.
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