I think this image does a great job of integrating with your song title. I'm a bit at a loss for words to critique this photo. I don't really know how to suggest making it any better. I think the stopped action works nicely for this shot. The on camera flash usually does a very good job of that :) I don't think you could have done any better job with this particular image.
I think that what this particular photo lacks, for me, is artistic impact. Subjectively, this photo does not grab my imagination and run with it. In other words, it's not something that I would consider printing and framing to hang on my wall. I understand that all photos are not for this intent also.
gotta love the spit take! doesn't look like you had to whack him too many times before you got the shot either. "no boxers were harmed (all that bad) during the production of this photograph."
Great idea. I just find the boxing glove a bit tacky (not for the picture, but the way the glove is constructed; looks like silk or something). Nice freeze. Jacko. 8
Excelent focus! I really like the idea behind this shot. Definately depicts the song. The lighting is good, and the angle and framing/cropping are also good. Really nice color as well. Can't see a single thing I'd have liked to have seen done differently. Good luck in the challenge.