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Challenge: Human Portrait (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D
Lens: Canon EF 85mm f/1.8 USM
Location: My house in Pennsylvania
Date: Mar 9, 2013
Aperture: 14.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/200
Date Uploaded: Mar 11, 2013

Holy heck, this doesn't look sharp at this size.

Place: 52 out of 119
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Avg (commenters): 6.6667
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Avg (non-participants): 5.6667
Views since voting: 315
Views during voting: 275
Votes: 142
Comments: 5
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07/27/2013 10:34:12 AM
What an adorable child and pose! I love the soft feel and spontaneous look to this
03/20/2013 10:03:29 AM
Hi, I saw you were wishing you had some comments on where you missed with this one. Overall I like it I like her pose and facial expression and the lighting is good. When doing a studio shot you need to pay attention to all the details, this will seem harsh but her hair needs a good combing. The hair needs to look like it is messy on purpose or be done nicely. The way it is right now makes it look kind of snapshotish. Camera angle is important too and on this one you are too low in my opinion you should have gotten higher more in line with her eyes, right now I am hitting on her shoulders and it is hard as a viewer to connect with her. Overall the sharpness is okay but I wish it was a bit sharper on the eyes. And like ' . substr('//www.dpchallenge.com/images/user_icon/21.gif', strrpos('//www.dpchallenge.com/images/user_icon/21.gif', '/') + 1) . ' LVicari said a bit more processing would have done this shot wonders, it would have taken it from a little above average to an excellent shot.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/19/2013 10:42:41 PM
Some Jill Greenburg processing would do this wonders
03/19/2013 03:27:55 PM
so she is 8
03/19/2013 01:16:09 PM
Cute child and I like the detail in the hair and love the background. IMO, a little less centered would be better and the eyes in better focus. (voted earlier)

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