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Challenge: Light On White VI (Minimal Editing I)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon FL 55mm f/1.2
Location: NWNJ
Date: Mar 3, 2013
Aperture: 1.2
ISO: 800
Shutter: 60
Date Uploaded: Mar 3, 2013

folded tissue on copy paper. a boring shot but I like how subject fades in and out of focus and into and out of the background. the paper is curved, which might explain some of the vignetting.

Statistics
Place: 60 out of 78
Avg (all users): 4.8627
Avg (commenters): 4.5000
Avg (participants): 4.2941
Avg (non-participants): 5.1471
Views since voting: 216
Views during voting: 201
Votes: 102
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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03/15/2013 06:23:18 AM
critique club

i don't like this image. the tungsten color cast isn't pleasing, the shadow on the right is attempting to capture my attention.

i admire the attempt at simplicity, it needs better lighting, too many competing elements take away from the what you are attempting to show based on your description.
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03/12/2013 01:39:08 AM
it is about the play.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/10/2013 08:33:23 PM
Love the soft lighting.
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03/10/2013 05:46:23 PM
This looks yellow to me not white! I do like the simplicity of your photo.
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03/07/2013 01:06:12 PM
Try overexposing by one stop to get the background lighter
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03/06/2013 06:02:58 PM
Has a vintage feel to it! Wish the rose was formed a little better..since my initial impression was a crumpled piece of paper :)
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03/04/2013 09:58:55 PM
I suspect the brownish color will decrease the scores. I'll be interested in any description of how this was made.
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03/04/2013 03:07:05 PM
well. your white balance was seriously off, and the exposure isn't as good as could be hoped, along with the fact that your subject is brighter than the background. Sorry, I really feel bad giving you a 3, but this is just miles away from excellence.
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