The all seeing eye does make this shot special. The movement tells us this person is rushing to make another connection or some other deadline. The colorful noise in her head area even adds to the story.
Ha! The eye in the background makes this, changes it from a "snap" into a "story". Good catch. One suggestion: trim off some of the dark area at the top, it is a bit top-heavy and doesn't ad information to the story (in my view).
If I may most humbly suggest, your topic is (or should be) "Ambiguity" and these two are off to a brilliant start. They are both multilayered images we rarely see in dpc. Keep it up and I'll be disappointed if you don't.
I like this. The eye immediately catches yours, the barrier creates a separation between two worlds: your world and the commuter's world. The rushing girl looks stressed by all this - she's too late! Good catch.
This is very well done - you can see clearly that it's a woman rushing but the extreme blur adds an anxious quality to it .. she must really not want to be late - the motion is made even more intense by the fact you have the iron barrier and the eye in focus - very nice work.
Oh! I love motion blur! This is awesome. At the same time, it reminds me how lucky I am not to have to do this commute every day. She looks like she's walking faster than I can run!