I thing I see what you're getting at but I'm not sure it works. The shot is a bit too dark to give the feeling of sunlight and I do think it needs at least one point of focus.
Hmmm... I really don't know where to go with this one. I can see a certain abstract quality, even modernistic bent to the image. But, there's something lacking in general appeal to me. It's not composition or balance, that seems to be there. There is backlighting. Maybe its because I try so hard to focus all the time with my bifocals. Sorry. Good luck with the other raters.