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09/13/2004 08:19:49 AM |
| you know that this would have rocked if you had taken it at night...sorry it didn't go higher. |
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09/09/2004 05:37:34 PM |
| very nice photo......I like the feeling of this photograph.....makes me wish I was the one standing there taking in the beautiful scenery! |
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09/09/2004 03:36:57 PM |
This shot holds little appeal for me I'm afraid. The subject has her back turned on the viewer which immediately puts up a barrier. This coupled with the railing and quite a bland, colourless scene beyond renders the shot quite inert.
If she had been standing turned 3/4 of the way towards us looking out to the water's edge beyond it would have led the eye into the shot. You had some quite bright light here so I would have stopped down a bit to around f6-8, focused 2/3 out thus attaining some richer tones and longer DOF. At the moment all we have to look at is her well focused back!
Sorry not to be more positive. |
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09/08/2004 07:53:08 PM |
| I think Boat house row is the more imporant part of this picture so it might help to focus on the boat houses instead of the person in the foreground. I lager DOF shot might have actull allowed for both to be in focus. |
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09/07/2004 07:27:36 AM |
| Beautiful shot, the girl has made this into something special, yet she is not the whole focus of the photo. Love it. Reminds me of a photo of a beautiful girl leaning on a railing just like this .... as the porche driver gets distracted and crashes over the edge LOL |
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09/07/2004 04:30:28 AM |
| I would have like to see the houses in focus, and as the main subject, and not the woman. |
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09/06/2004 09:38:48 PM |
| Man, I can't get past how her shoulder blades are placed... looks like she's a contortionist or something. The eyes are drawn to them, which is most likely not the intention of your image. |
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09/06/2004 03:54:56 PM |
| philadelphia, a paradise?!? are you on john street's payroll? just kidding. my wife and i lived in manyunk for a couple years, and boathouse row has always been one of our favorite views. nice capture. |
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09/06/2004 03:39:26 PM |
| Too much emphasis on the model and not enough on boat house row. |
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09/06/2004 09:07:04 AM |
| I really like what you're trying to do in this photo, but since you're going for a travel guide shot it might be better to focus on the scenery and not on the woman. Regardless, this is still a nice shot. |
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09/06/2004 12:24:56 AM |
| A deeper DOF is needed to bring into focus the houses. A smaller aperture would have helped achieve that. |
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