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08/29/2012 08:33:10 AM |
Originally posted by posthumous:
the background is beautiful and suggestive. a photo needs background or else it becomes too simple and forgettable. a crop would only hurt this photo. |
the man is correct. There is such wonderful exuberance in the expression, and then the second layer, a pastoral background feel bringing the viewer, or at least me, to an age of farming and a simpler life. For that, the shot its one of the best in the challenge in my eyes. |
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08/21/2012 12:47:16 PM |
| the background is beautiful and suggestive. a photo needs background or else it becomes too simple and forgettable. a crop would only hurt this photo. |
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08/21/2012 08:46:46 AM |
Originally posted by rooum:
I never got a chance to comment during voting but this was my favourite smile of the challenge. :) I gave it a smiley 10. |
Thank you sir - very kind of you:) |
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08/21/2012 08:35:57 AM |
| I never got a chance to comment during voting but this was my favourite smile of the challenge. :) I gave it a smiley 10. |
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08/20/2012 03:35:52 AM |
Originally posted by jagar:
Underrated me thinks, superbly natural moment and a gem of a keepsake. |
Thank you Jagar - your words are most appreciated. Definitely another keepsake so no reason to complain as my main aim with photography is to create yearly photo books of my children. |
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08/20/2012 03:34:27 AM |
Originally posted by CNovack:
Voted earlier coming back to comment.
What a great laughing happy smile. There is pure joy in her expression - nothing staged. Now I do have two small critiques that I believe would turn a good shot into a great shot. Bring us closer to the main subject by cropping/zooming in more on the little girl. There is just a bit too much background to let her joyous expression fill the frame and become the dominent focal point. My final critique is on how the title can compliment the photo (oh, man, she is getting nitpicky now). I don't get the sense that this little girl is camping. I did not deduct points but I simply want to point out that "show, don't tell" is a good rule of thumb. The background with what looks like sheep and the rolling hills that are separated into plots invokes more of the idea of a visit to a farm. |
Thank you for the super feedback. I will give your suggestion a go. I wasn't that happy with the processing - actually there is very little processing but wondered if I could have improved it with better processing skills. I hadn't thought of the crop.
Good point about the title - I was very rushed as usual to think of a title and that was the first thing that came to my head as we were stood outside our tent in a fantastic site in Bigbury On Sea (only £5 per night with a fantastic sea view!!) |
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08/20/2012 03:13:36 AM |
| Underrated me thinks, superbly natural moment and a gem of a keepsake. |
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08/19/2012 11:41:55 PM |
Voted earlier coming back to comment.
What a great laughing happy smile. There is pure joy in her expression - nothing staged. Now I do have two small critiques that I believe would turn a good shot into a great shot. Bring us closer to the main subject by cropping/zooming in more on the little girl. There is just a bit too much background to let her joyous expression fill the frame and become the dominent focal point. My final critique is on how the title can compliment the photo (oh, man, she is getting nitpicky now). I don't get the sense that this little girl is camping. I did not deduct points but I simply want to point out that "show, don't tell" is a good rule of thumb. The background with what looks like sheep and the rolling hills that are separated into plots invokes more of the idea of a visit to a farm. |
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08/19/2012 10:48:14 PM |
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08/19/2012 09:08:23 PM |
| Gotta love those teeth, and enthusiasm, I just love this age, so much fun, bumping up to an 8 all the best. |
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08/19/2012 08:56:29 PM |
| What a darling, happy girl. Terrific shot. Voted earlier. |
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08/19/2012 06:34:23 PM |
| Makes me laugh with her. Great smile. (voted earlier) |
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08/19/2012 09:57:07 AM |
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08/16/2012 10:18:24 PM |
| AWESOME! simply awesome. you should print this as large as you can afford to and hang it where you can see it as much as possible. what a perfect tonic for a rough day. |
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08/13/2012 11:58:43 PM |
| Oh what a joyful smile! (I love camping, too!) |
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08/13/2012 11:24:30 PM |
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08/13/2012 11:20:53 AM |
| That is a wonderful grin. |
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