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01/12/2003 04:03:31 AM |
Critique Club
Content-Composition
What a cute picture! But its not only cute, but also has captured a great moment and feeling. Composition is great, with the window framing your daughter but no waste at the sides. Your daughter is framed perfectly with this composition. The awe captured is wonderful.
Background
The blurred background is perfect and really captures motion, while still maintaining some detail, to let the viewer see what she is seeing.
Technical
Exposure is perfect here, with the brighter light from outside not blown out at all and the lighting on your daughter is soft and natural, which shows good detail. Focus is great here, lovely and sharp on your daughter while keeping the feeling of motion outside. Tiny bit soft on the fingertips but it isn't too distracting.
My opinion
Lovely picture and one to frame and put on the wall. Should be shared with all the family! Congratulations on 10th! Good Luck in the next challenge! |
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01/07/2003 04:02:50 PM |
| Congratulations, Martina!! Your best shot ever and I'm sure there will be more like this in the future :-) |
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01/06/2003 04:46:40 PM |
Thanks all for your kind comments!
I'm really surprised that it scored this high, but still I've got to learn a lot, I guess!
For the ones interested - it's my daughter, Kora... she loves travelling!
... Martina. |
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01/06/2003 12:54:15 AM |
| should have scored much higher.... |
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01/05/2003 10:11:49 PM |
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01/05/2003 08:15:56 PM |
Excellent. Brought a smile to my face. Nice composition, lovely idea. Well done.
Bumping to a 10, I love this photo! |
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01/05/2003 07:36:42 PM |
| Wonderful photo. He seems to be really enjoying the scenery flying by. He won't remember this but the photo will prove he took a train ride. Love how you let the train window frame the photo. You couldn't do much about the angle of the window.....Yes you could have. It would have been better had you gotten down and taken the photo up at an angle with the window so it would frame the photo perfectly. Hind site. Still a good shot and worth an 8. PTL |
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01/05/2003 12:54:44 AM |
| Cute and warm, love the intensity |
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01/04/2003 08:40:03 PM |
| Cute shot. I like the motion blur Jacko |
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01/04/2003 12:22:52 PM |
| It's a lovely picture capturing an intimate momemt between the child and his or her journey in space and time alike. Frome here to there but also from childhood into the future. The subdued light in the train contrasts well with the bright exterior and the stillness inside with the movement outside. |
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01/04/2003 10:26:32 AM |
| Cute and well done! This is my favorite for the week. 9 |
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01/03/2003 01:19:09 PM |
| Ha, the contrast between the blurred part and the rest is well used. Good pic. |
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01/03/2003 08:59:54 AM |
| beautiful shot and excellent exposure to go along with it :) I can still see all the details in the darker areas and nothing in the window is blown out. I believe this is my favorite image in this challenge.. great work :) - 10 - setzler |
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01/02/2003 04:56:45 PM |
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01/01/2003 09:23:23 PM |
| the feeling of awe and curiosity of the little boy is priceless. Great shot. |
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01/01/2003 08:45:20 PM |
| This photo really shows the wonder of the child traveling very well. 10 :) |
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01/01/2003 06:31:10 PM |
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01/01/2003 12:29:20 PM |
| i love this image, i almost forgot to score this beautiful image. i like the movement. congrats! |
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12/31/2002 12:17:00 PM |
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12/30/2002 10:39:23 AM |
| One of my favs ! = 10 Shiiizzzam |
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12/30/2002 02:59:49 AM |
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