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Twin Span to Maple Island
Twin Span to Maple Island
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Foreground Bokeh II (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D40
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor -S DX 18-105 f3.5-5.6
Location: Ottawa, Ontario
Date: Jun 16, 2012
Aperture: 8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/250
Date Uploaded: Jun 16, 2012

Narrow bridges on Maple Island in Ottawa Ontario


Statistics
Place: 120 out of 126
Avg (all users): 4.5984
Avg (commenters): 5.5000
Avg (participants): 4.4200
Avg (non-participants): 4.7222
Views since voting: 363
Views during voting: 231
Votes: 122
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0


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08/09/2012 09:30:31 AM
If you look at your score distribution, you have a normal bell curve, with the exception of the 1, 2, 3 votes. So, I think the DNMC votes really bit you with this one. I would also agree with the "featureless foreground" comment. The issue you're working around here is that you have a very wide and very short main subject (the two bridges). A different perspective, with the bridges at a slant rather than at right angles with the camera might work better - unless you wanted to emphasize the symmetry of the bridges. A slanted perspective would narrow and heighten the main subject.
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08/01/2012 07:24:26 PM
A very pleasant scene, quiet and serene.

I think the score reflects the vast majority of voters impression that the foreground is not bokeh. It appears at first glance to be smooth water, and for the quick voter this would likely result in the low score.

From a deeper look at the photo, it appears that the blur in the foreground is due in part to the smooth water and secondly by some post processing such as noise ninja etc. This may not actually be the case, but it is what it appears to be. Looking at the entries that scored very highly, the foreground brings something important to the scene, whether it be water droplets or leaves or other flowers, where that foreground is a very important contributing factor to the image. In the case of your shot, the foreground water is quiet, but our eyes are only drawn to the bridges and trees.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/21/2012 10:42:09 PM
It's a nice exposure of the bridge, trees and their reflections. However, the foreground bokeh is insignificant and the lower half of the photo ends up being featureless.
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06/20/2012 07:43:59 AM
Like the blue/green contrast and the long shutter effect on the water !
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