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09/07/2004 05:35:38 AM |
| Really nice. I like it a lot. I would although have like to see little more negative space above the bridge. |
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09/04/2004 07:54:22 AM |
| Like the B & W. The electric poles are distracting. |
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09/03/2004 01:30:27 PM |
| good B&W shot ...I'm waiting for the train to come lol |
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09/03/2004 04:52:14 AM |
| The compositional elements of this shot are really quite interesting - so it's perhaps interesting to think about why it doesn't work, at least for me, which it certainly doesn't. Your sky here is pretty flat and monotonous, which perhaps doesn't help - though one would think that just pushed the interest to the bridge and railway. The actual organisation of elements across the frame is a touch weak - the vanishing point of the railway, and indeed the tracks themselves are relegated to a very small corner of the image, making them lose some impact. There's a lack of detail here too - that fine resolution that would show the textures of the bridge, and the vegetation beside the tracks. A scene that has great potential, I think - but in the end let down by composition (the placement of the rails relative to the bridge) and very simply poor overly-general light. Nothing I think you could have done about the weather I know, but nevertheless that is what lets it down. |
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09/03/2004 12:21:33 AM |
| I like your choice of b/w in this image. Nice shot. |
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09/01/2004 11:40:20 PM |
| I love black and whites!...awesome shot |
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09/01/2004 10:19:30 PM |
| Would have been much better without the third of the pic to the right of the vertical support. |
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09/01/2004 02:15:30 PM |
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09/01/2004 12:12:56 AM |
| Seems a bit small, framing doesn't stand out to me. Looks nice in black and white, nice composition |
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