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My mark on this photo is basically down to the fact that there is nothing capturing my eye here. What exactly is intended to draw my eye into this picture? These records had some great potential, but you took the most obvious angle (shot) of them. What was your creative intent? What were you trying to say to the viewer? As is, it's just a picture. Try changing it up, moving your body around, look for different angles, look beyond the obvious. A closeup angles to the side of one of these and a shallow DOF would have been interesting, as just one example. |