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04/14/2004 05:50:14 PM · #1 |
I took these 2 days ago when I whas out shooting in nature, I have some others too but some may be good "sihlouettes" so I don't want to show them until I decide that.
 
I'm thinking the first may have been good in "Strength" but that's too late now :)
Message edited by author 2004-04-14 17:55:06. |
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04/14/2004 06:08:18 PM · #2 |
Great subject matter for both of these. I feel that you cropped too tightly on the first image. I would like to see the top of the building and a little more space around it to emphasize the importance of the building in the image. Both images appear a little bit underexposed, particularily in the shadows where there is some great details to reveal. If you have a method of 'opening' up the shadows a little bit I would use it. They look fine in color but I would love to see these in black and white, at least for the first image. Nice work.
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04/14/2004 06:39:49 PM · #3 |
I agree with most of Tim's feedback, but, I might try to make them a little sharper. Also, I disagree with the crop comment on the first photo, I like what you have. All in, these are both nice photos.
Bill
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04/14/2004 07:01:07 PM · #4 |
Thanks for commenting, I agree with Tim too they are a bit under exposed, foggy morning and not being best friends with my new camera yet. Ill try to work on that, also I find the ideea of trying a sepia or a b/w for the first one good and I will surely try that. About the croping is not only that I like it too, but it's not really a cropping it's how I took it, only cropped it by 20 pixels or so. Bill sharper shots are one things I really have to learn to take the most with my new cam I somehow fail that for now. I don't think its the cams fault I think is me, I only have it for 2 weeks still getting used to it.
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04/14/2004 07:03:30 PM · #5 |
What is interesting on both pictures are all the colors contain within them.Especially the 2nd shot.
Message edited by author 2004-04-14 19:04:01. |
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04/14/2004 07:09:21 PM · #6 |
Originally posted by faidoi:
What is interesting on both pictures are all the colors contain within them.Especially the 2nd shot. |
Forgot to say that the subject is the same in both and the first is the same house in the first taken from behind. Some homeless people must have leaved there before we got there the place whas verry dirty, lots of garbage, that's what the colors are, and the colors in the right of the 2'nd is another house bigger in the deserted and destroyed same way as this one. Colors of the bricks and paint are so bright because that morning stoped raining and it whas raining for a week and they were all wet.
Also I forgot to take my car out of the first one. If any of you can find (almost half of it is there) it I pay the beers if we ever meet :)
Message edited by author 2004-04-14 19:10:35. |
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04/14/2004 07:12:17 PM · #7 |
| Both photos seem to have very high contrast, this is easy to fix in something like PhotoShop. Lowering the contrast will also reduce the color saturation, which I think would also help the photos. Other then that they are very nice photos. |
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