Square crop..... I KNOW WHERE I WENT WRONG.....

Tamron 70-180mm F/2.8 Di III VXD

03/14/2006 08:26:55 PM · #1

I entered this image into the "Square-crop" challenge, and I REALLY STUFFED-UP BADLY with this entry..... I have learned a VERY VALUABLE LESSON HERE, THATS FOR SURE.....

I realized that I "over processed" way to much, so as to get it into the challenge on time. NEVER AGAIN WILL I DO THIS.....

I took it on the day of roll-over, so maybe rushed it.....

I entered it within about 2 minutes to spare, and this is something I will NEVER do again.....

PLEASE don't judge me on this image alone, but visit "my portfolio" to see what I have learned and hopefully you will see other images that are much better.

I feel quite ashamed, and I would like to put my head in a brown bag, along with this photo.

Thank-you for your time.

Message edited by author 2006-03-14 20:27:20.

MadMan2k

Sony Alpha a6400

03/14/2006 08:38:18 PM · #2

Don't worry about it, everyone has submissions that do poorly. Heck, most of mine do even if I like them and didn't overprocess at all.

buzzrock

Fujifilm X-M1

Fujifilm XC 16-50mm f/3.5-5.6 OIS

03/14/2006 08:41:08 PM · #3

Sherpet-- I realy love that scene..

Do you have another version you wanna share now that the challenge is over? Less Proccessed?

pcody

Canon PowerShot G6

Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8

03/14/2006 08:43:00 PM · #4

Maybe post the original and have a "how would you process this?" session. Could be fun.

03/14/2006 08:45:06 PM · #5

Good lessons learned Shez! Speaking of overprocessing, ehem, I've been known to do that as well ;)

edit: Don't want to appear to hijack your thread. just posting an image so lessons can be learned as well. Mayb I suggest you post your original and possibly a re-edit so we can comment? Thanks.

Rikki

Message edited by author 2006-03-14 20:46:08.

03/14/2006 09:02:08 PM · #6

See below; The "processed" image against the "origional"I entered this image into the "Square-crop" challenge, and I REALLY STUFFED-UP BADLY with this entry.....

I have learned a VERY VALUABLE LESSON HERE, THATS FOR SURE.....

processed

now this one

origional

I realized that I "over processed" way to much, so as to get it into the challenge on time. NEVER AGAIN WILL I DO THIS.....

I took it on the day of roll-over, so maybe rushed it.....

I entered it within about 2 minutes to spare, and this is something I will NEVER do again.....

PLEASE don't judge me on this image alone, but visit "my portfolio" to see what I have learned and hopefully you will see other images that are much better.

I feel quite ashamed, and I would like to put my head in a brown bag, along with this photo.

Thank-you for your time.

Message edited by author 2006-03-14 21:02:54.

Cam

Sony DSC-F717

03/14/2006 09:03:39 PM · #7

Originally posted by Rikki:

Mayb I suggest you post your original and possibly a re-edit so we can comment? Thanks.

Rikki

Yeah, that would be cool, and way too many times I have gone over the top.

crayon

Samsung Galaxy S24 Ultra

03/14/2006 09:04:51 PM · #8

Originally posted by sherpet:

origional

The original looks more pleasing to the eyes.

03/14/2006 09:11:41 PM · #9

Done what you asked re the above.....

I have had the WORST WEEK POSSIBLE IN MY WHOLE LIFE, WITH SO MANY MISTAKES.....

First this, and then had to asked if one of my entries should be withdrawn, and now have my first "disqualification" for another stupid mistake....

I have been really so un-well this week, as the Doctor says I am close to have phenemonia, as I have a severe chest infection. Maybe if ever like this again, just look, but don't enter.

I was very close to leaving "DPC", but I can't, as I "LOVE" it so much.

I will just have to put things into perspective, and maybe take some time out for awhile.

Originally posted by Riggs:

Originally posted by Rikki:
Mayb I suggest you post your original and possibly a re-edit so we can comment? Thanks.

Rikki

Yeah, that would be cool, and way too many times I have gone over the top.

Message edited by author 2006-03-14 21:31:30.

03/14/2006 09:14:22 PM · #10

no worries Shez! things can be worse ;) as far as taking a break, I suggest most people should do it. it's quite refreshing and you come back rejuvinated and full of vigor.

i've had my fair share of DQs for stupid mistakes. one of them even cost me a 4th place finish. but keep one thing in mind, this should be for fun.

:)

03/14/2006 09:24:00 PM · #11

"THANKS" Rikki, as I take heart to you kind words.

I just think it maybe be because it is due to "my health", as that was one of the main reason why I didn't join for such a long time. I "LOVE" this site, and would be LOST without it.....

What did you think of my origional.....re this thread.

Originally posted by Rikki:

Cam

Sony DSC-F717

03/14/2006 09:27:38 PM · #12

Well take care of yourself first, but stick around and the main thing is not to let the scores or even a DQ bug ya. Like Rikki said its just for fun. I have made tons of mistakes, and I stick my foot in my mouth about half the time. But, they aint kicked me out yet. :)

And you are fun to have here, so stick around.

03/14/2006 09:33:20 PM · #13

The original I agree is by far better than the edited version. However, it lacks contrast. A bump in the contrast would help. Now in as much as a bump in the contrast would definitely help, there isn't much visual appeal in the image to keep your audience interested. I don't want to sound mean or anything but for us to all continue to learn, I think we need to hear these things or else we'll keep on doing the same mistakes.

Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.4D

03/14/2006 09:34:04 PM · #14

Originally posted by Riggs:

Yeah we've been trying to silently kick Riggs out but he just keeps on coming back :P

notesinstones

Nikon D200

03/14/2006 09:38:33 PM · #15

No need to hide, it happens to all of us sooner or later. :) You learn WAY more from a brownie than a primary colored ribbon.

Just breathe, relax and realize that in the grander scheme, it doesnt matter so much. Nobody remembers that you got the brown, it doesnt really affect your average all that much, and you learn a lot in the process.

klstover

Panasonic DMC-FZ8

03/14/2006 10:22:40 PM · #16

You're already one of my favorites, so definitely not judging you on this one entry. Everyone has bad times.

Especially with health problems. It sucks, doesn't it, how that can just affect every area of your life? Really discouraging when you can't enjoy something as much because of what your body's doing to you this time around.

Like people are saying (but ultimately you are the judge of course), time off may be helpful. But if you find DPC at least a little enjoyable, don't go away forever. Do what you love, keep up that great attitude, and that will help you feel better emotionally, which can in turn boost the physical feelings a bit.

Don't be ashamed. You're a great photographer, and if someone doesn't ever look at your portfolio, choosing instead to focus on a single image, it is their loss.

If you decide that time off is what you need, I will miss you and look forward to your return. Will say a prayer for your chest infection.

Message edited by author 2006-03-14 22:28:45.

ggbudge

Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 II

03/14/2006 10:31:22 PM · #17

Originally posted by sherpet:

I have been really so un-well this week, as the Doctor says I am close to have phenemonia, as I have a severe chest infection.

Girl! Take care of your health first! If you don't, you won't be able to take more great photographs!! :)

wheeledd

Panasonic LUMIX-DMC ZS100

Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS

03/15/2006 12:10:37 AM · #18

Sherryl,

I hope you are feeling better.

I've looked through the images in your portfolio and I like them. My votes on them have been pretty consistently higher than the averages you have received, especially on the Square Crop image. I've left you comments on it and on the Odd Couple image.

In both cases, I think the images would have been better if you had turned off your flash. Fill flash can really help a photo when it lightens shadow areas that otherwise would be too dark. But when the flash becomes the dominant light source in an outdoor scene, the photo loses the natural feel that it should have.

--Dan

kteach

Nikon D50

Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 28-80mm f/3.5-5.6

03/15/2006 06:16:32 AM · #19

Other threads have talked about how unfortunate it is that we get to practice a shooting a subject or a special technique for a week, and then move on to the next shiny object that comes along. The good thing about the weekly challenges is that if things don't quite go your way, it's only been a week and you can move right on to the next challenge. You've taken a good attitude about this one, learning from your mistakes instead of just complaining about a low score. Reflecting on your own work and learning from mistakes will only make you a better photographer (even though the work in your portfolio speaks for itself). So... it's off to another challenge for you, and I'm sure your scores will be back up in no time! Hope you're feeling better soon! :)

Art Roflmao

Canon EOS-6D Mark II

Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS

03/15/2006 06:29:31 AM · #20

Originally posted by sherpet:

I realized that I "over processed" way to much, so as to get it into the challenge on time. NEVER AGAIN WILL I DO THIS.....

hehehe, that must be one of the most common mistakes people initially make! Sharpening is good. Massive sharpening must be gooder! ;-)

Originally posted by sherpet:

I took it on the day of roll-over, so maybe rushed it.....

This won't be the last time that happens - I gurantee it. :)

Originally posted by sherpet:

I entered it within about 2 minutes to spare, and this is something I will NEVER do again.....

Next time try getting it in there in the last fifteen seconds or so - it's much more exciting! :)

Originally posted by sherpet:

PLEASE don't judge me on this image alone, but visit "my portfolio" to see what I have learned and hopefully you will see other images that are much better.

I feel quite ashamed, and I would like to put my head in a brown bag, along with this photo.

Thank-you for your time.

Crikey, Shez! You've got much to be proud of and nobody judges anyone around here. It's like one big Eutopian family. ;-) Well, ok there are some black sheep, but I won't point them out.

Have fun, don't lose heart, live & learn. Hope to see lots more from you.

03/15/2006 06:49:25 AM · #21

Thanks mate and have just sent you an email.....

Originally posted by Art Roflmao:

Originally posted by sherpet:
I realized that I "over processed" way to much, so as to get it into the challenge on time. NEVER AGAIN WILL I DO THIS.....

hehehe, that must be one of the most common mistakes people initially make! Sharpening is good. Massive sharpening must be gooder! ;-)

Originally posted by sherpet:
I took it on the day of roll-over, so maybe rushed it.....

This won't be the last time that happens - I gurantee it. :)

Originally posted by sherpet:
I entered it within about 2 minutes to spare, and this is something I will NEVER do again.....

Next time try getting it in there in the last fifteen seconds or so - it's much more exciting! :)

Originally posted by sherpet:
PLEASE don't judge me on this image alone, but visit "my portfolio" to see what I have learned and hopefully you will see other images that are much better.

I feel quite ashamed, and I would like to put my head in a brown bag, along with this photo.

Thank-you for your time.

Crikey, Shez! You've got much to be proud of and nobody judges anyone around here. It's like one big Eutopian family. ;-) Well, ok there are some black sheep, but I won't point them out.

Have fun, don't lose heart, live & learn. Hope to see lots more from you.

suemack