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11/21/2005 07:13:41 PM · #51 |
you could see the time in his face
you could fell his pain at a glance
but when he played
the sun did shine
from those eyes so deep in his face |
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11/21/2005 07:16:20 PM · #52 |
from the night came dawn
in it softly rose
a haze cross this
forbidden zone |
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11/21/2005 07:21:41 PM · #53 |
LEFT A POEM
Originally posted by ursula:
This picture means a lot to me, and, if you want to, I'd appreciate a poem for it:
These two are long-time friends, they both participate in the Senior's Dance on Saturday afternoons in my town. I love to watch the joy and the energy of the seniors at these dances.
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11/21/2005 07:41:50 PM · #54 |
Originally posted by saintaugust:
LEFT A POEM
Originally posted by ursula:
This picture means a lot to me, and, if you want to, I'd appreciate a poem for it:
These two are long-time friends, they both participate in the Senior's Dance on Saturday afternoons in my town. I love to watch the joy and the energy of the seniors at these dances.
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Thank you so very much!!!! It's beautiful. It's just right. Is it allright if I print it out with the picture and give it to them? I'm sure they would love it.
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11/21/2005 07:43:59 PM · #55 |
sure, i don't see why not... if you could put my name at the bottom in tiny little letters, that would be cool.
Originally posted by ursula:
Originally posted by saintaugust:
LEFT A POEM
Originally posted by ursula:
This picture means a lot to me, and, if you want to, I'd appreciate a poem for it:
These two are long-time friends, they both participate in the Senior's Dance on Saturday afternoons in my town. I love to watch the joy and the energy of the seniors at these dances.
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Thank you so very much!!!! It's beautiful. It's just right. Is it allright if I print it out with the picture and give it to them? I'm sure they would love it. |
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11/21/2005 07:45:30 PM · #56 |
Oh, yes, I was going to do that, put "Poem by Jeff Hayward" with it. Thanks again. I'll give it to them this Saturday, and report back.
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11/21/2005 08:38:05 PM · #57 |
Originally posted by bear_music:
Originally posted by lynnesite:
Wow, Robert, you nailed her.
What a gift, thank you SO much! |
I like horses. They seem ancient beyond understanding to me. I like them very much, and I like how they sigh :-)
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I can't imagine living away from my 3 now, in truth they are well grounded and Twix's dad's breed is rooted to the center of the earth, elemental horses (Lipizzans) ...poor Twix (in the photo), my equine soulmate, got waaaay sicker today, life threatening even. Hopefully the worst is over, but the trailer is hooked up for an emergency trip for surgery, today was awful for both of us. Your poem helped me affirm how danged important she is to me. The only one uninsured though, dang it.
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11/21/2005 09:09:48 PM · #58 |
Originally posted by ursula:
Oh, yes, I was going to do that, put "Poem by Jeff Hayward" with it. Thanks again. I'll give it to them this Saturday, and report back. |
That is a sweet poem. You should post it here with the pic for everyone to enjoy. |
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11/21/2005 09:12:22 PM · #59 |
Originally posted by saintaugust:
LEFT A POEM
Originally posted by ursula:
This picture means a lot to me, and, if you want to, I'd appreciate a poem for it:
These two are long-time friends, they both participate in the Senior's Dance on Saturday afternoons in my town. I love to watch the joy and the energy of the seniors at these dances.
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Nice poem Jeff. Do another one if you would, you can have the naked guy lol. |
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11/21/2005 09:26:06 PM · #60 |
Originally posted by gloda:
This picture could get your imagination going.
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Working on this pic now. |
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11/21/2005 10:02:50 PM · #61 |
How about  or  .
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11/21/2005 10:24:45 PM · #62 |
lol thanks.
Originally posted by jsas:
Originally posted by saintaugust:
LEFT A POEM
Originally posted by ursula:
This picture means a lot to me, and, if you want to, I'd appreciate a poem for it:
These two are long-time friends, they both participate in the Senior's Dance on Saturday afternoons in my town. I love to watch the joy and the energy of the seniors at these dances.
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Nice poem Jeff. Do another one if you would, you can have the naked guy lol. |
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11/21/2005 11:55:55 PM · #63 |
"Forgiven, Not Forgotten"
Stained with tearful good-byes
lies a passport of old.
Worn and torn by the years,
evidence of a story untold.
It seems his ambitions ever
kept him on the move,
leaving behind a lover's
hopeless desire to prove.
He continually heeded success's call.
Heart broken, she always remained.
Now, his only proof of existence
is captured behind an iron restraint.
A token of observation in a museum
where memories are begotten
lies his tattered passport.
He is forgiven, not forgotten.
Message edited by author 2005-11-22 16:44:44.
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11/22/2005 07:33:37 AM · #64 |
Originally posted by Sunniee:
Bet you're not bored anymore!!!!
If ya get bored again!!! ;o) |
I am on this one now and I am not bored anymore. |
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11/22/2005 09:21:05 AM · #65 |
"Alone on Sandy Beach"
Lost in a quiet moment,
peace and tranquility persuades.
A cool relaxing morning,
while the ocean serenades.
Slipping off her shoes
to feel the soothing sand,
She sits down to meditate
with simple solace in hand.
Pondering what the day may bring
or what lessons life will teach.
Time stands still as she reflects,
Alone on Sandy Beach.
Message edited by author 2005-11-22 09:38:26.
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11/22/2005 10:29:23 AM · #66 |
WOAAAAA!!! THAT'S AWESOME! You are quite a talented poet!!!Thank you and huge HUGS for that!!!!!
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11/22/2005 10:49:31 AM · #67 |
Originally posted by messerschmitt:
just..just in case anyone ever would get close to bored again..;-)
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Jeff or Robert
maybe i was not very clear in my asking or it could be the theme does not really inspire u to do some lines
when the first is the case i like to mention again that i really like the poems and i would be curious what ure mind comes up with on this theme of Lowlands or just about that image i took
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11/22/2005 10:56:06 AM · #68 |
Well!! I just decided to give it a try, I can see you have a talent... and seem to be really bored, so here goes my photo-for-a-poem
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11/22/2005 12:16:08 PM · #69 |
Jeff is better than I am at turning the poetry tap on and off. I'm a hot-and-cold poet, I'll bring another one in sooner or later though...
R. |
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11/22/2005 12:19:19 PM · #70 |
Try this one! Thanks. |
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11/22/2005 03:28:24 PM · #71 |
Originally posted by Palmetto_Pixels:
OK, if the offer is still on the table, this one is very near and dear to my wife and I.
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Stephen
I cradled you in my palm at your frail birth
and prayed for God to keep me safe from harm,
that I might shelter you for all your years:
as my hand then, soon my encircling arm.
I studied your eyes. A tender philosophy
was there, already there, waiting for you to teach:
how in the smallest speck of sand there hangs
a world entire ΓΆ€” in everything the each.
My son, my love, let me propose this trade:
I pledge my strength to you, for all my days,
if you will lend me yours, that as you grow
I may relearn from you my childish grace.
Robt.
Message edited by author 2005-11-22 17:17:55. |
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11/22/2005 03:30:56 PM · #72 |
I'm speechless. Thank you Robert, that's perfect.
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11/22/2005 03:31:37 PM · #73 |
Originally posted by messerschmitt:
Originally posted by messerschmitt:
just..just in case anyone ever would get close to bored again..;-)
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Jeff or Robert
maybe i was not very clear in my asking or it could be the theme does not really inspire u to do some lines
when the first is the case i like to mention again that i really like the poems and i would be curious what ure mind comes up with on this theme of Lowlands or just about that image i took |
Wil,
I'm studying it. This stuff either comes or it doesn't. But it's a nice shot :-)
R. |
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11/22/2005 03:33:38 PM · #74 |
Originally posted by Palmetto_Pixels:
I'm speechless. Thank you Robert, that's perfect. |
You're very welcome :-) Feel free to use it as you wish.
R.
Message edited by author 2005-11-22 15:33:54. |
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11/22/2005 04:30:31 PM · #75 |
What a tremdous response from everyone! I appreciate all of your pictures and the talent they represent. I work with them one at a time, in the order that they were posted. I'll continue to write as long as you want post the photographs. As of now, I am working on "Wedded Bliss" the Las Vegas wedding.
Also, wonderful work Robert, again your latest work fits hand in hand with the photo. Jeff
Originally posted by alfresco:
Here's one of happy newlyweds in Las Vegas
I don't know them nor the photographer, I simply lent them my spot in exchange for some shots of them being shot:
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