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 07/17/2005 02:37:54 PM · #1
opinions please because they help.
07/17/2005 03:03:13 PM · #2
O.K. I will start. I think the first one is a bit overexposed. Too bright for me. I like the second and last ones the best. I like the B&W of the last one. All in all good job.

P.s. It looks a little oof on the 4th one.
 07/17/2005 03:58:38 PM · #3
Of these I think the second is my favorite. The first is way blown out. In the third photo I find the pipe at the top corner a distration, and the fourth, the focus is too soft for my taste.

Also (putting my SC hat on for a moment) a quick note. While nude photos are permitted on the site and in the forums, out of courtesy to other users please either include a warning in the subject line of the thread, or use a link rather than a thumbnail for any nude images, including a warning in the link. Some users do browse this site from work, or with children in sight of the screen. This will help them decide for themselves what they wish to view and when.

Thanks,
-Terry
 07/17/2005 04:07:13 PM · #4
welll, #1 is blownout and that has been pointed out

#2, while it is properly exposed, I am perplexed about the composition and the direction here...I don't see any justification for the open jeans.

#3& #4 seem more artistically oriented...but compositionnally I think #3 suffers from to much headroom and #4 is fairly underexposed... both would benifit from some smoothing.

#5, while technically better, the angle is awfully unflatering to the model as it forces her to lower her head to the point where she seems a "chunky" face (which she does not)... camera angles are a very delicate thing.

also...watch those implants...at this angle the scars are fairly apparent...

all and all, not a bad set of shots.

Message edited by author 2005-07-17 16:08:50.
 07/17/2005 05:23:35 PM · #5
Iron the bedspread and let the pillows show - make it look more like a bedroom. not just a place you put her for a backdrop.
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