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05/09/2005 05:43:09 AM · #1 |
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05/09/2005 05:54:03 AM · #2 |
| very nice shots both of them. good luck on the entry you did submit :) |
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05/09/2005 05:58:42 AM · #3 |
Originally posted by robgo:
very nice shots both of them. good luck on the entry you did submit :) |
thanks rob..fyi my entry is doing 4.7
im soo talented in picking the wrong one:) |
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05/09/2005 06:19:23 AM · #4 |
I would've given the Bar pic a high vote - but the second one is less interesting.
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05/09/2005 06:36:15 AM · #5 |
I think both are interesting, but might need a bit of work if you were going to enter them.
The Bar pic is missing a framing element on the RHS, and the frame is very ovberexposed. There are some spots on the windows. I am not sure that you needed the reflections as well as the frame to indicate "window" (may be able to dial these out with a polarising filter). But otherwise I like!
The green doorway is a little grainy on the interior elements, and I would consider making the crop either tighter or looser - at the moment, to me, it feels a bit in between. Thinking about it, I like the grain on the interior - nice contrast with the exterior. Pic is missing a point of interest, but is a ncie, relatively abstract piece (though I note that these tend to do less well in voting).
Overall, I would have scored your entries each a 5 as they stand (I am generally not a very high scorer). Both have technically good elements in them, needing a bit of post processing. The more interesting photo, the bar, has more technical issues than the green door. With a bit of post processing work, they could go up a notch for me (this is always an issue in the member challenges, which I think makes the scoring in them that much tougher).
Hope this does not sound too harsh: I very rarely go to 7 or 8, but to get that much from me, I like to be a little more captivated by something in the photo than I am here. I like to reserve the 9 & 10 spots for truly stunning photos!
Good luck with your submitted photo! |
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05/09/2005 06:40:36 AM · #6 |
ah i really appreciate ure extended judgement matthew
most of ur points i agree to especially them on the the sloppy finishing off
i probably would have spend another hour on the needed adjustements when i would have used them for the entry its true
thanks for sharing ure vision
edit: not just sloppy finish of but sloppy typing too..hmm
Message edited by author 2005-05-09 06:42:37. |
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05/09/2005 10:46:52 AM · #7 |
[quote=messerschmitt] 
i changed the title to coffeeshop as it was a coffeeshop
the older man in the middle of the pic who was in a wheelchair was preparing a joint
they say it has medicinal value..
(though i like a drink im not sure about alcohol's medical values just to put the subject a bit in perspective)
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05/13/2005 09:35:36 PM · #8 |
I didn't submit this ... and my entry isn't doing so hot.
I went a different way, but I still thought this looked cool. |
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05/17/2005 05:06:01 PM · #9 |
Just uploaded some of my outtakes.
  
The one I submitted:
what do you think? |
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05/17/2005 05:21:07 PM · #10 |
Well JPR, I am particularly fond of your entry. But I do have to say thst I also really like your outtakes, the first one especially.
I like your entry best of all though.
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05/17/2005 10:06:22 PM · #11 |
| Thanks. I liked the one I submitted best too. |
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