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05/25/2026 12:00:32 AM · #1 |
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Post your outtakes from the Rhythm V challenge here. |
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05/25/2026 09:18:47 AM · #2 |
I don't think it would have probably performed any better, but since I have no other use but my portfolio for this one, here's the one I originally had and swapped out for the challenge:
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05/25/2026 10:10:05 AM · #3 |
Originally posted by kanaj:
I don't think it would have probably performed any better, but since I have no other use but my portfolio for this one, here's the one I originally had and swapped out for the challenge:
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Johnathan - I think the outtake would have scored higher as the appeal / expected entry for this challenge favored repeating elements or patterns. Having said that, personally I liked your entry better but the presentation seemed awkward with the downward angle of the silos. I get trying to find a dynamic that adds some tension to an image but for some it may have seemed like an accidental 90 degree rotation.
Since it's not here and I referenced it ==>  |
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05/25/2026 10:12:08 AM · #4 |
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Great feedback, Barry! I appreciate it. |
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05/27/2026 03:04:33 PM · #5 |
Hmmm...
I personally like the one you entered.
The large and small aperature throws off the "rhythm" for me in the other one.
I think you chose wisely, young grasshopper. |
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05/27/2026 03:09:12 PM · #6 |
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I appreciate the feedback, Lydia! |
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05/27/2026 03:24:23 PM · #7 |
 . My entry.
 . The outtake I thought about entering, but since the challenge was rhythm I decided to use my entry because it had a musical reference for me. |
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05/27/2026 03:36:34 PM · #8 |
Originally posted by glad2badad:
[quote=kanaj] I don't think it would have probably performed any better, but since I have no other use but my portfolio for this one, here's the one I originally had and swapped out for the challenge:
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Since it's not here and I referenced it ==> |
Gave your entry a 5, would probably have given a 6 to the outtake. The OOF foreground Lydia mentioned does bother me, but as Barry notes the rhythm is much more obvious and, for me, compelling. The tones are interesting, too. |
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05/27/2026 04:16:51 PM · #9 |
Originally posted by kanaj:
I don't think it would have probably performed any better, but since I have no other use but my portfolio for this one, here's the one I originally had and swapped out for the challenge:
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I liked your entry but felt the perspective is a bit awkward. For the outtake, if it were mine, I would have tried cropping from the bottom and adjusting the sides from there. And I'd love to see it in black and white (at which point I probably would have scored it higher than your entry). |
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05/27/2026 05:26:41 PM · #10 |
Originally posted by PennyStreet:
. My entry.
. The outtake I thought about entering, but since the challenge was rhythm I decided to use my entry because it had a musical reference for me. |
As I mentioned, I liked a lot your entry. The outtake is more predictable, at least for me |
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05/27/2026 05:29:31 PM · #11 |
Originally posted by glad2badad:
Originally posted by kanaj:
I don't think it would have probably performed any better, but since I have no other use but my portfolio for this one, here's the one I originally had and swapped out for the challenge:
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Johnathan - I think the outtake would have scored higher as the appeal / expected entry for this challenge favored repeating elements or patterns. Having said that, personally I liked your entry better but the presentation seemed awkward with the downward angle of the silos. I get trying to find a dynamic that adds some tension to an image but for some it may have seemed like an accidental 90 degree rotation.
Since it's not here and I referenced it ==> |
I would have preferred your entry more contrasty, esp the top left corner, or B&W and/or distorted even more. As they say, it has potential. I would fuss with it more just for the exercise,
The outtake, as Lydia mentioned |
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05/27/2026 05:43:28 PM · #12 |
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The feedback from everyone is really helpful. :-) You are helping me see with different eyes. |
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