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09/24/2014 12:00:31 AM · #1 |
| Post your outtakes from the Right Angles III challenge here. |
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09/24/2014 12:16:44 AM · #2 |
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09/24/2014 05:04:35 AM · #3 |
Tough call. "Be Happy" is kida soft and to bright IMO. "West Wall" has an abstract nature and might not appeal to some voters, but the photographic execution is flawless. If i were you the choice would have been between "13 23 81" and "West Wall". I like them both, but the "13 23 81" is more striking.
Here are my Right Angles III outtakes on Google Drive, including the entry.
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09/24/2014 08:59:31 AM · #4 |
@ damjanev I think you chose the right one. It's good. But I also like the first iteration of Vertigo.
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09/24/2014 10:05:18 AM · #5 |
Entry:
And, I'm happy with how it did, but I considered this -- I liked the jawline running parallel with the frame and there were more right angles.
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09/24/2014 10:50:20 AM · #6 |
Originally posted by markwiley:
Entry:
And, I'm happy with how it did, but I considered this -- I liked the jawline running parallel with the frame and there were more right angles.
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The one you entered. No contest. :-)
The clutter on the camera right is not appealing at all.
Message edited by author 2014-09-24 11:18:47. |
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09/24/2014 10:52:21 AM · #7 |
Originally posted by markwiley:
Entry:
And, I'm happy with how it did, but I considered this -- I liked the jawline running parallel with the frame and there were more right angles.
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The expression is far better in the entry, but what killed it for me was the motion blur. I'm not sure I would have given your outtake a better score though, because the expression is weird. If you could meld the clarity of your outtake with your entry... bingo.
Message edited by author 2014-09-24 10:53:40. |
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09/24/2014 10:57:29 AM · #8 |
I think West Wall may have done better in this challenge, just because the angles have more impact. When it comes to simply, "Which photo do you like better?" I would say, your entry. |
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09/24/2014 11:52:33 AM · #9 |
Originally posted by jomari:
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would have been my choice. i think it's great! |
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09/24/2014 07:31:49 PM · #10 |
Took this for the challenge, but did not enter. |
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09/25/2014 02:20:23 AM · #11 |
Originally posted by markwiley:
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And, I'm happy with how it did, but I considered this -- I liked the jawline running parallel with the frame and there were more right angles.
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You chose the right one. It is a beauty.(I'm an Australia - that is an expression which does not equate to she is a beauty, although she is an attractive girl.)
I'm wondering which shot came first. Did you get the outtake before she became aware of you and then she turned and noticed you? Or after you getting the entry is she shutting you out?
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09/25/2014 04:05:33 AM · #12 |
Originally posted by markwiley:
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And, I'm happy with how it did, but I considered this -- I liked the jawline running parallel with the frame and there were more right angles.
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The entry! There's no question here. The way it breaks the right angles makes the shot.
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09/27/2014 10:54:42 PM · #13 |
 
Message edited by author 2014-09-27 22:58:33. |
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09/30/2014 01:04:44 PM · #14 |
Entry:
Alternative:
It was a toss up between colour and texture or geometry..... |
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