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10/06/2004 05:09:48 PM · #1
Shot this pic a few days ago of my Daughter
Constructive comments would be appreciated

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10/06/2004 05:16:56 PM · #2
i dont know about giving you anything constructive because i barely know what i am doing, but i think it would have been cool to see her feet in the sand, otherwise i think it is beautiful. i like the orange sun reflecting of the front her. you caught a pretty wave, right before it covered the rocks
10/06/2004 05:19:54 PM · #3
Thanks for your reply.
The reason you can`t see her feet was that she`s standing on a boat slipway and it doesn`t do the scene any favours.
10/06/2004 05:23:56 PM · #4
It gives me me feeling of someone who enjoys water whatever the weather.
10/06/2004 05:38:59 PM · #5
Hope you don't mind. I took your picture and cropped out the at the waters horizon because IMO the hills and sky was a bit bland, not your fault just looked very smoggy. Then I used levels and increased the blue in the water making it look cooler since she was wearing a sweater and had the sun shinning on her. I can email you a copy if like or you can try it yourself to see what you think. At the moment I don't have a way of posting it so if you would like to view I would have to email it to you then you can post to see if others think it improved the photo or not. Just my 2 cents.
BTW you photo looks good they way you have it.

Message edited by author 2004-10-06 17:39:54.
10/06/2004 05:39:56 PM · #6
I like it quite a lot...love the light. But I agree with another post that it'd be better if her entire body [or even less of her]was showing.

Not that you ALWAYS have to have feet in a shot, but for some reason it just 'feels' like they should be there to be complete.
01/17/2005 10:57:24 AM · #7
Nice photo! Has a calming effect on me!
01/17/2005 11:07:15 AM · #8
I like the image, excellent lighting.
Needs feet and maybe a slightly higher viewpoint to get rid of the bland sky (or a grad filter might do the trick)
01/17/2005 11:09:14 AM · #9
I think it is absoulutly beautiful just the way it is!!!!
01/17/2005 11:15:02 AM · #10
I agree about having the feet in the shot, since you titled it Wet Feet. Otherwise, a little less of her body would work a little better (with a different name, of course.) Beautiful shot nonetheless. :o)
01/17/2005 12:07:56 PM · #11
I'd have to say that the feet crop is the only major flaw I see with this image. Go back, shoot it over. Put the girl on the beach so you have no reason to crop out the bottom of the image.
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