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 08/09/2004 01:52:28 AM · #1
Please tell me what you think about my eyes...well, they aren't mine, but you get the point.


08/09/2004 03:55:10 AM · #2
I really like the second one :-)
 08/09/2004 03:59:25 AM · #3
Originally posted by stormy:
I really like the second one :-)


I second that!
 08/09/2004 05:58:57 AM · #4
Does anyone have a critique for me on either one?
 08/09/2004 10:53:18 AM · #5
The second image is stunning.
 08/09/2004 11:06:04 AM · #6
Originally posted by Loki:
Does anyone have a critique for me on either one?


I don't like it as well as the 2nd one.

Ok, just a little Monday am humor.

The first image is ok but there's just someone about it that is distracting to look at. It doesn't have the same impact as the 2nd image. Maybe if you included less of the model's face, that would help the viewer focus on the eyes more.
 08/09/2004 11:16:35 AM · #7
I like the first one better. Reminds me of Kathleen Turner. If you wanted draw more attention to the eyes you might try adding more clouds in the lower half or fading the lips more.
 08/09/2004 11:41:16 AM · #8
I like the second one quite a bit - the effects outside of the "box" are great and I like the colors. The focus on the iris seems a bit soft to me - I think it would jump out more if it were sharper. Also, the highlights in the eye are rather amorphous - when seeing an eye this close I'd like to see something more recognizable.
 08/09/2004 11:47:39 AM · #9
I left you some comments. Great work you have!
 08/09/2004 02:59:15 PM · #10
Thank you all VERY much for the comments and critiques.
 08/09/2004 03:13:34 PM · #11
Here's a thought about #1: I like it a lot (I like the idea) and I find the way the clouds and the lips "interact" a bit distracting. Just wishing they didn't come together like they do.
08/09/2004 03:28:30 PM · #12
Originally posted by boomer:
I went to buy some camouflage pants the other day, but I couldn't find any.


How do you think I feel Gary...I'm IN the military.

One time I was lost for three days, but nobody knew it! That's because for the accountability formation they saw a bush and thought it was me. When I finally got back they didn't want me anymore. They told me the bush worked harder.
 08/09/2004 04:06:17 PM · #13
I like the second one so much ! The first one is more "common" in my opinion , the clouds and the face are nice but there is no "game" between them. Blueye Abstract is a really an interesting work ! Congrats ! (Please excuse my poor english !)
 08/09/2004 05:10:50 PM · #14
Originally posted by Loki:
Originally posted by boomer:
I went to buy some camouflage pants the other day, but I couldn't find any.


How do you think I feel Gary...I'm IN the military.

One time I was lost for three days, but nobody knew it! That's because for the accountability formation they saw a bush and thought it was me. When I finally got back they didn't want me anymore. They told me the bush worked harder.


ROFL! ;-)
 08/10/2004 02:36:44 PM · #15
Re: Your first pic. Try cropping about mid-nare on the nose. I think you find the result everybit as stunning as the second pic. It will still have that benign face in the sky look even without the Mona Lisa smile, but the eyes will "jump" you.
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