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09/16/2008 01:03:57 AM · #1 |
So I went to Canada and now I am back in Japan. I had little time to set anything up, no light stand or umbrella. Was working with what I had and with little daylight. Anyways, here's the first series of shots I took. I did PP to them, but I'm hoping for some constructive criticism as I'm not all that happy.
[thumb]721967[/thumb] [thumb]721968[/thumb] [thumb]721969[/thumb]
[thumb]721970[/thumb] [thumb]721971[/thumb] [thumb]721972[/thumb]
[thumb]721973[/thumb] [thumb]721974[/thumb] [thumb]721976[/thumb]
Message edited by author 2008-09-16 01:04:31.
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09/16/2008 01:14:38 AM · #2 |
In general they are very nice... a couple things I would do if editing them.
a) straighten them
b) crop to just the gazebo... the rest is distraction
c) brighten them up a bit (with the exception on the second one
d) sit back and enjoy the memories of the trip :)
hope that helps a bit |
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09/16/2008 09:28:09 AM · #3 |
I plan on putting them in a hand made album. I have to edit all the pictures I took of the family and then crop them all the same.
The second picture was done during the last few minutes of actual sunlight.
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09/16/2008 10:12:49 AM · #4 |
I sent you a pm, drop me your email addy!!
here is the the darkest pic you had up there and the action i was talking about
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Message edited by author 2008-09-16 10:17:04. |
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09/16/2008 10:49:03 AM · #5 |
I'm curious why you chose not to bump the ISO up instead of dealing with such slow shutter speeds? You stuck with ISO 100 and one shot was done with 1/10 of a second shutter speed.
Matt
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09/16/2008 11:27:54 AM · #6 |
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09/16/2008 11:35:53 AM · #7 |
Originally posted by MattO: I'm curious why you chose not to bump the ISO up instead of dealing with such slow shutter speeds? You stuck with ISO 100 and one shot was done with 1/10 of a second shutter speed.
Matt |
No particular reason. It was rushed. Other photos are better. This series just happens to be dark.
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09/16/2008 12:27:54 PM · #8 |
sent, all you have to do is install it. then when it runs, just play with the op level |
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09/16/2008 09:36:35 PM · #9 |
Much thanks. I'll be playing with it this evening after work.
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09/16/2008 11:03:28 PM · #10 |
I agree with Eyesup on the crop the gazebo thing, when you try to include the whole gazebo the Subjects (the family) become really small and secondary.
Message edited by author 2008-09-16 23:04:07. |
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