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Tamron SP AF 28-75mm f/2.8 XR Di for Canon

09/09/2008 09:41:20 AM · #1

Let me know what you think, about the posing, lighting, editing or anything else. I have not been on here in a while and the feedback and comments on Model Mayhem are pretty basic.
Thank you...
Trevor
:-)

pamelasue

Canon EOS-5D Mark II

09/09/2008 10:03:51 AM · #2

I like the setting, very fitting with her outfit, nice job not having a sunflower growing out of her head! basic pose looks ok to me (her hand seems slightly un-natural up by her face)... the top right bright corner is slightly distracting though ... maybe a gradient to darken the sky and make it pop? Did you use a reflector to help get light under her hat and onto her face? I think it would be a bit stronger if she had some sort of catchlights in her eyes ... overall you've done very well ...

09/09/2008 10:59:56 AM · #3

Originally posted by pamelasue:

Thank you so much for the feedback. We got the shirt for like 50 cents just for the shoot!!! I wanted the yellow bracelettes to be in the frame, did a few with her hand on her hat but got bored with that. So her hand ended up there. Can do some work to darken the sky as well. No reflectors used.... had a 3x6 scrim to block / soften the sunlight in the picture. I did brighten her face in photoshop it was darkened by the hat. Will also see about adding catch lights to the eyes.

Thanks again.

Nikon AF-S Nikkor 70-200mm f/2.8G ED VR II

09/09/2008 03:47:25 PM · #4

Bump... for the afternooners...

aliqui

Nikon D300s

09/09/2008 03:57:40 PM · #5

Originally posted by pamelasue:

basic pose looks ok to me (her hand seems slightly un-natural up by her face)...

When you say "oh my" with a strong southern belle accent the hand fits just fine.

Nikon AF-S Nikkor 70-200mm f/2.8G ED VR II

09/09/2008 05:15:13 PM · #6

Originally posted by aliqui:

Originally posted by pamelasue:
basic pose looks ok to me (her hand seems slightly un-natural up by her face)...

When you say "oh my" with a strong southern belle accent the hand fits just fine.

LOL... I don't know... I think a Southern Belle would not be seen with that little clothing... maybe that is why she is saying "oh my" huh?

aliqui

Nikon D300s

09/10/2008 05:32:28 AM · #7

Originally posted by youngnova:

Originally posted by aliqui:

Originally posted by pamelasue:
basic pose looks ok to me (her hand seems slightly un-natural up by her face)...

When you say "oh my" with a strong southern belle accent the hand fits just fine.

LOL... I don't know... I think a Southern Belle would not be seen with that little clothing... maybe that is why she is saying "oh my" huh?

Oh my, indeed!

Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM

09/12/2008 08:58:03 PM · #8

Here is another picture I took and edited. Let me know what you think about this one. I took a different angle for the edit of this one.

rlewis

Canon EOS-40D

09/12/2008 09:11:11 PM · #9

IMO, in both cases a reflector or fill flash to increase exposure around the eyes would add to the image.

09/13/2008 12:19:58 AM · #10

Originally posted by rlewis:

IMO, in both cases a reflector or fill flash to increase exposure around the eyes would add to the image.

Very good point, no matter how much I play in photoshop, that is noticable. I guess there were good and bad that came along with the hat.

Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM

09/13/2008 09:48:31 PM · #11

Ok these pictures are from the same session. My wife [user]71188[/user] Took and edited these. Feedback would be great!

Picture 1

Picture 2

Thanks again!

violinist123

Canon EOS-6D

09/13/2008 09:58:29 PM · #12

Umm 1) give her a raise 2) let her do all your editing from here on out lol.