Preggo Pics Critique please - DPChallenge Forums

07/11/2007 07:40:33 PM · #1

So I took these and decided they would be good for some PS practice (cause I stink at PS) comments?

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Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II

07/11/2007 08:23:19 PM · #2

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swankFoto

Fujifilm X-E1

07/11/2007 08:37:28 PM · #3

Nice job, these images definitely benefited from the post processing you did.
I think you started off with some unflattering harsh light which, although a histo might not show it, felt like there were blown out areas.
The B&W helped tone this down for the last two.

My favorite is the edit version of the first one.
Two main reasons; her expression is genuine and emotes a nice glow and the stretch marks are not as prominent as in the other two.
I know that is a badge of some pregnancies but creative lighting and some toning down of them in post proc would help keep the eye from being naturally drawn to them.

eta - hope this helps

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jmsetzler

Sony Alpha a6000

Sony 16-50mm f/3.5-5.6 E-mount

07/11/2007 10:37:35 PM · #4

I know it's preference, but I think all of the images have way too much contrast. The black clothing has all gone completely black and it looks more like empty space against the background rather than clothing. It creates a bit of discontinuity.

Are those 'originals' edited? I have never seen such a high level of contrast on an out-of-camera exposure.

BAMartin

Apple iPhone 5

07/11/2007 10:45:48 PM · #5

My only comment, and it has nothing to do with processing, is that she seems so upset/mad/sad in all of these photos. I fail to see a happy or peaceful mother to be.

Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM

07/12/2007 09:34:51 AM · #6

Originally posted by BAMartin:

My only comment, and it has nothing to do with processing, is that she seems so upset/mad/sad in all of these photos. I fail to see a happy or peaceful mother to be.

Actually she was quite happy, but I can see how the look could be seen as sad..ish... thanks for the comment

HeiSch

Canon EOS-5D Mark III

07/12/2007 10:03:56 AM · #7

An other suggestion: clone out the stretch marks of the skin. after going through this 3 times, its' nothing a mother will and wants to remember. My wife didn't let me take pics because of that. (pre-digital era :) like in last millenium :o ). You can always keep both versions.

Tamron SP AF 28-75mm f/2.8 XR Di for Canon

07/12/2007 10:12:55 AM · #8

Originally posted by HeiSch:

well as far as the streatch marks... I was going to clone them out, but I was asked to leave them in... she see's them as something she's earned... guess it's an individual thing

LeeD

Canon EOS-30D

07/12/2007 10:20:57 AM · #9

All in all they aren't bad shots. I would agree on the comments about the harsh lighting and posing. When shooting maternity shots, it's best if you just give simple direction and then let them do what's comfortable for them. You'll get more natural and relaxed poses.

I like that you used a simple black background and matching wardrobe, but you do have to be careful that the wardrobe doesn't "blend" too much with the background. Also be very aware of your client's skin tone. He has beautiful alabaster skin that would do well in a nice high-key shot with a white background.

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