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 09/03/2006 04:07:39 AM · #1
He lost a loved one on flight 93, I took a few shots as he told me the story. I know its not the best, but I tried.

He is also my first signed model release. :)



edit to add -- I tried to fix the dark ring


Message edited by author 2006-09-03 04:10:15.
 09/03/2006 04:48:56 AM · #2
Powerful.
 09/03/2006 08:16:33 PM · #3
Don't suppose anyone has any ideas to improve it? Or is it ok as it is. I am going to give this to the gentleman in the picture and would like it to be nice.

Thanks
 09/03/2006 08:28:32 PM · #4
Would the bottom left photo be better if the writing were level to the horizon?
--jrjr
 09/03/2006 08:30:22 PM · #5
Christine, nice job on the pictures. They are powerful.

As I whole I would like the pictures more prominent. The earth/galaxy thing in the back takes away from him, imo. Maybe use the top left pic as the background and inset the other two...?
 09/03/2006 08:30:36 PM · #6
I didnt notice that.... thank you. :)
 09/03/2006 08:31:18 PM · #7
Originally posted by ButterflySis:
Christine, nice job on the pictures. They are powerful.

As I whole I would like the pictures more prominent. The earth/galaxy thing in the back takes away from him, imo. Maybe use the top left pic as the background and inset the other two...?


Ohhhh what an awsome idea. I have to try that, thank you. :)
 09/03/2006 08:35:58 PM · #8
the pictures have a clear chronological order. I would cascade them diagonally from upper left to lower right. You can also experiment with sizing them differently.
 09/03/2006 08:50:49 PM · #9
Originally posted by liltritter:
Ohhhh what an awsome idea. I have to try that, thank you. :)


I tried it quick. It's not great but with some playing maybe it'd work.

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