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05/16/2006 10:09:09 AM · #1 |
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05/16/2006 10:26:59 AM · #2 |
Justin,
Left posts on photos.
Hope they help,
Clay |
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05/16/2006 10:32:14 AM · #3 |
Composition feels off in shots 1 & 3... centred compositions don't work here. The tilt in shot 3 adds some interest, but why put him in the middle of the frame? It makes the entire left of the shot redundant, making the shot feel unbalanced.
In shot 1, you've added some compositional interest by the use of negative space above the trumpet player, but why put his head in the middle? This has given negative space to the left of him which feels unbalanced. Red light doesn't give the best conditions for gig photography, it's usually best to wait for the lights to change. Shot 3 is overexposed... or you needed to use the channel mixer to find a clearer colour channel. Shot 2 is more successful compositionally, but the background is a bit cluttered.
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