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08/19/2002 02:18:57 PM · #1 |
i was wondering how this would've done in the challange:
Pencil Outtake
take a look at my other pics as well
P.S.:if it looks a bit fuzzy and pixelated, its just a roughly edited, first shot picture |
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08/19/2002 03:00:12 PM · #2 |
| please someone critique it! (i know im whinny but i really would like to know) |
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08/19/2002 03:04:38 PM · #3 |
What is the reason for the blue ends? Looks a bit out of place and the shot is rather grainy.
But..
The composition is good. |
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08/19/2002 03:08:56 PM · #4 |
To be honest, I believe the color has been terribly played with. The idea is cute, but seems to be fairly common in the challenge, so creativity and unique-ness is low. Lighting isn't that great. However, if all that is set aside, the angle is good, and the idea it's self is good. I'd probably only give it a 3 or 4 though if submitted like this cause of the aweful edit to the color.
(sorry) |
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08/19/2002 03:23:52 PM · #5 |
| i know its grainy, i just wanted to know if the composition was good, maybe i should've submitted a retake of this shot instead...oh well |
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08/19/2002 03:27:11 PM · #6 |
Originally posted by Meggie:
i was wondering how this would've done in the challange:
Pencil Outtake
take a look at my other pics as well
P.S.:if it looks a bit fuzzy and pixelated, its just a roughly edited, first shot picture
Hidden is my favourite out of the 4 you have on pbase. Certainly it
is the one that shows the most creativity or thought. The colours
work well for me, making it more stylised and interesting than just
a straight 'here are some pencils and a crayon' type shot. It has
a good jumbled, yet structured feel to it, with the various ends
at different lengths/ layers.
Might be more dynamic if you shot it rotated slightly, so that the
pencils were more slanted, than vertical, just would add some more
movement. Also I'd try to move the green crayon so that it was
for example over in the lower left, rather than right in the center.
Perhaps less of a close up, with even more pencil ends would be effective ?
Just some ideas - like it.
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