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01/25/2006 05:32:17 PM · #26 |
Still sounds like a gallery rather than their photographs..
Fine art photographs taken around the world
woudl be better
Originally posted by Gringo:
or even better:
Pete & Kavita Favelle's Photography
Fine art from around the world
Ugh! scratch that one, I like this best so far:
Pete & Kavita Favelle's
Fine art photography from around the world |
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01/25/2006 05:32:26 PM · #27 |
Originally posted by GeneralE:
Given that research shows you have somewhat less than a tenth of a second to grab their attention...[/i] |
Hmmmmm... given that maybe instead of:
"Fine art prints on paper and canvas"
You could have:
"Fine art prints on paper" or
"Fine art prints" or
"Fine art" or
"Fine" or
"F"
lol!
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01/25/2006 05:33:02 PM · #28 |
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01/25/2006 05:43:38 PM · #29 |
Originally posted by Di:
Still sounds like a gallery rather than their photographs..
Fine art photographs taken around the world
woudl be better
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Hmmm, Taken around the world..... I think photos are taken regardless of who took them, so I see what you mean, but I'm not sure that line helps it out.
How about:
Pete & Kavita Favelle - What I did on my summer vacation.
See these pictures we have for sale and buy some.
They are from out trips.
That should sum it up. ... naw, I still like this one best:
Pete & Kavita Favelle's Photography
Fine art from around the world
Message edited by author 2006-01-25 17:44:13. |
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01/25/2006 05:53:16 PM · #30 |
we dont have to get snotty
Originally posted by Gringo:
Originally posted by Di:
Still sounds like a gallery rather than their photographs..
Fine art photographs taken around the world
woudl be better
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Hmmm, Taken around the world..... I think photos are taken regardless of who took them, so I see what you mean, but I'm not sure that line helps it out.
How about:
Pete & Kavita Favelle - What I did on my summer vacation.
See these pictures we have for sale and buy some.
They are from out trips.
That should sum it up. ... naw, I still like this one best:
Pete & Kavita Favelle's Photography
Fine art from around the world |
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01/25/2006 05:56:21 PM · #31 |
May be to late, but have you considered using something like fine images? Fine art gives me the impression it will be pictures of artwork from around the world..
Just a thought.
Pete and Kavelle's Photography
Images from around the world
Or fine images... but that sounds a bit odd.
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01/25/2006 05:58:02 PM · #32 |
Hmmm...
OK well I am redoing anyway because the psd template provided BY vistaprint on their own site is actually not the correct dimensions and therefore my upload was rejected.
OK...
I'm with the idea to add 's
So it's Pete & Kavita Favelle's
Fine art photography from around the world
(I think I'm gonna hope that people "get" that bit as I just like the sound of it better than "from around the world" though I do understand the concern as it's a touch ambiguous)
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01/25/2006 06:02:50 PM · #33 |
I'm going around in circles? :o)
I have taken some advice on board though:
Firstly to remove the "A series" bit which everyone quite rightly pointed out was superfluous.
Also I've removed Photography from the first line and moved it into the subtitle/ strapline bit which I agree makes more sense (thanks Di).
But I think I may go back to using "prints" after all...
Pete & Kavita Favelle's
Photographic prints from around the world
or
Pete & Kavita Favelle's
Photography from around the world
or
maybe I should go pull my hair out and worry about this tomorrow night instead!!!! But I SO wanted to order it today. The offer is, I have just called to find out, on till end of week.
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01/25/2006 06:03:56 PM · #34 |
Originally posted by Di:
we dont have to get snotty |
Aaaww, I was just funn'in with the situation Di. I'm sorry if it came out in a snotty way. I like to be helpful where I think I can, but at the same time I don't take many things to seriously.
I'm sorry if my humor wasn't taken as I indended it to be.
(This is why I don't post much in the forums, sarcasm doesn't seem to work well).
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01/25/2006 06:10:31 PM · #35 |
This one works well Kavey, Good luck with it.
Pete & Kavita Favelle's
Photography from around the world |
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01/25/2006 06:13:06 PM · #36 |
Thanks...
My only concern is that it doesn't convey that we're selling stuff people can hang on their wall - they might think we're just an online gallery or selling ourselves as events photographers but I think I shouldn't try to communicate too much with a basic marketing postcard!
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01/25/2006 06:17:19 PM · #37 |
OK Bed time, will be back to this Friday AM!
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01/25/2006 06:18:15 PM · #38 |
yeah I think the addition of the 's' works well and makes it less ambiguous
I'd go with one of those last ones Kavey, - the 'photographic prints from around the world' gives more of an impression of selling them imo (rather than just a gallery showcasing), but the 'photography from around the world' makes more of a thing of the fact they're from distant lands I've never been to...does that make sense? dont know why it seems a different stress when they're so similar..
guess it depends on what impression you want to give
good luck with choosing, the longer it takes the more you'll be tearing your hair out :P
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01/25/2006 06:22:26 PM · #39 |
"Fine art that will make your walls beg for more!"
*sigh* It's been a really looong day.
hehe
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01/25/2006 06:32:26 PM · #40 |
I'm having a rough week... so what i normally woudl read as humor comes across negatively sometimes.. sorry i misread what you were conveying..
Originally posted by Gringo:
Originally posted by Di:
we dont have to get snotty |
Aaaww, I was just funn'in with the situation Di. I'm sorry if it came out in a snotty way. I like to be helpful where I think I can, but at the same time I don't take many things to seriously.
I'm sorry if my humor wasn't taken as I indended it to be.
(This is why I don't post much in the forums, sarcasm doesn't seem to work well). |
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01/25/2006 06:37:03 PM · #41 |
Originally posted by Di:
I'm having a rough week... so what i normally woudl read as humor comes across negatively sometimes.. sorry i misread what you were conveying..
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No worries Di, I hope your week gets better.
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01/26/2006 05:42:38 PM · #42 |
Just to update:
Much appreciate all the help I received, not only on this thread but also in DPC Fanatics chat from Di and Hokie...
In the end I swapped the lines completely and went with:
Prints from around the world
Photography by Pete & Kavita Favelle
www.fsquaredimages.co.uk
The text for the first line is bigger than the text size for the other two (which are the same as each other) which balances the composition of the text, to my mind.
THANKS AGAIN!
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