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12/18/2005 04:27:48 PM · #551 |
Originally posted by jsas:
Ok here is the finished poem Colette.
Photo by: Austin Sasek (my oldest son)
"Precious Moments"
Precious hugs and kisses
from my dainty little princess
melts all my stress away.
Precious smiles and giggles
as I tickle she wiggles
cherished little times of play.
Precious love and affection
a trusting heart for protection
is my duty for all of my days.
Precious moments and every
single little memory
will remain in my heart for always.
Jeff |
Perfect! |
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12/18/2005 04:43:33 PM · #552 |
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12/18/2005 06:11:20 PM · #553 |
has the second round started yet?
i really would be surprised what someone could come up with at these 3 words of this title
its brandnew so if any Poet out there feels some connection ..
i would be very pleased to read it ;-)
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12/18/2005 09:01:02 PM · #554 |
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12/18/2005 09:24:31 PM · #555 |
| If there is a second round I will need some more Mt.Dew, then I'll be willing and ready to go. lol |
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12/19/2005 02:27:34 AM · #556 |
Originally posted by jsas:
If there is a second round I will need some more Mt.Dew, then I'll be willing and ready to go. lol |
In more ways than one, methinks! ;-)
BTW, I updated //cosmos.ucsd.edu/~jbordner/dpc-poems/ this evening. If anyone finds any mistakes, please let me know!
Nordlys
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12/19/2005 10:00:22 PM · #557 |
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12/19/2005 10:21:04 PM · #558 |
| Wow! Ken, I think it is totally perfect. Everything flows together very well, I even like the frame and wouldn't change a thing. Thanks for sharing it, this is what it's all about. I know your Grandpa will love it. (I would hang it on my wall) Thanks Jeff |
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12/21/2005 12:31:01 AM · #559 |
| Ok I am working on wil's now I am back in action. |
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12/21/2005 11:50:22 AM · #560 |
Originally posted by jsas:
Ok I am working on wil's now I am back in action. |
.exiting ;-)! |
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12/21/2005 11:53:40 AM · #561 |
This is not my photo, but I'd love to see a poem for it.
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12/21/2005 07:18:36 PM · #562 |
Originally posted by fotomann_forever:
This is not my photo, but I'd love to see a poem for it. |
Oh man this made me tear up. It is pics like this that make me think how vain I am to complain about anything. Thanks for posting it, I will get to it soon as possible. |
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12/21/2005 08:46:20 PM · #563 |
Photo By: Wiel Schmitz
"The Willow, The Ladder and The Corn"
The willow, the ladder and the corn
are waiting nearby a country farm,
to fulfill the destiny of a painter, born
to paint the beauty of this scenic charm.
The ladder only leans against a willow,
it has no place to go and nothing to do.
The corn is only seasonal but will grow
another year after the snow and cold is through.
The willows stand there with a grand attention
as if they defend the corn and the ladder.
The green and white ground has compassion
as if to say this place of beauty matters.
The weeds and the snow try to reassure
the three friends that all hope is not torn
but soon this hidden scene will ever endure
once the painter, paints the willow, the ladder and the corn.
Jeff
Message edited by author 2005-12-22 02:53:02. |
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12/21/2005 10:08:44 PM · #564 |
Photo By: Rudra Mandal
"Fight the Cold"
Cold and worn
with hands of leather
he fights for warmth
against the weather.
A look of fear
overcomes his face
no shining joy
of a child's grace
only a hopeless stare
through innocent eyes
have swelled the care
of his hungry cries
He wonders when
or what he'll eat
he walks alone
on shoeless feet
these feet a troubled
path have trod.
He quietly asks
am I a child of God?
So who will tend
this little lamb?
Who will love
and comfort him?
Or is he left
to fend for his own
and find a small fire
to fight the cold.
Jeff
Message edited by author 2005-12-21 22:26:50. |
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12/22/2005 02:59:20 PM · #565 |
Originally posted by jsas:
Photo By: Wiel Schmitz
"The Willow, The Ladder and The Corn"
The willow, the ladder and the corn
are waiting nearby a country farm,
to fulfill the destiny of a painter, born
to paint the beauty of this scenic charm.
The ladder only leans against a willow,
it has no place to go and nothing to do.
The corn is only seasonal but will grow
another year after the snow and cold is through.
The willows stand there with a grand attention
as if they defend the corn and the ladder.
The green and white ground has compassion
as if to say this place of beauty matters.
The weeds and the snow try to reassure
the three friends that all hope is not torn
but soon this hidden scene will ever endure
once the painter, paints the willow, the ladder and the corn.
Jeff |
a fantastic story and the right words to make it come alive
i will treasure these 'collaborations'
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12/22/2005 06:37:53 PM · #566 |
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12/24/2005 12:20:08 AM · #567 |
Originally posted by Nordlys:
Originally posted by jsas:
If there is a second round I will need some more Mt.Dew, then I'll be willing and ready to go. lol |
In more ways than one, methinks! ;-)
BTW, I updated //cosmos.ucsd.edu/~jbordner/dpc-poems/ this evening. If anyone finds any mistakes, please let me know!
Nordlys |
Bumpity bump bump bumpity bump bump look at ole Nordlys go! |
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12/24/2005 12:30:16 AM · #568 |
Originally posted by jsas:
Bumpity bump bump bumpity bump bump look at ole Nordlys go! |
You're a little early--I'm not going for another 12 hours. ;-) I'm flying to the Chicago area tomorrow for Christmas to visit my parents, brother, and my brother's family. I'll see y'all when I get back on the 1st (will have spotty internet access there at best).
Nordlys, hoping the plane doesn't go "bumpity bump bump" too much!
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12/24/2005 12:54:29 AM · #569 |
Originally posted by Nordlys:
Originally posted by jsas:
Bumpity bump bump bumpity bump bump look at ole Nordlys go! |
You're a little early--I'm not going for another 12 hours. ;-) I'm flying to the Chicago area tomorrow for Christmas to visit my parents, brother, and my brother's family. I'll see y'all when I get back on the 1st (will have spotty internet access there at best).
Nordlys, hoping the plane doesn't go "bumpity bump bump" too much! |
Have a good trip James and Merry Christmas |
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12/24/2005 03:15:21 AM · #570 |
Is there a pic for this poem?
I am still working on this one lol
Teddy bear has
his cap on his head
sleepy eyes saying
its time for bed
pillows all patted
books have been read
kisses all given
prayers must be said.
Message edited by author 2005-12-24 10:19:39. |
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12/25/2005 04:33:01 PM · #571 |
| I want to thank everyone who posted a pic, for letting me and the very talented poets that wrote some awesome poems for some awesome pics. What a great gift we can give to each other. We will see if it will go into 2006. Jeff |
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12/25/2005 07:26:11 PM · #572 |
Jeff - the one about the ladder, corn and willow is just stunning. I almost felt inspired to write one and then read yours. Truly a beautiful piece of written art!
BRAVO
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12/25/2005 07:56:24 PM · #573 |
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12/25/2005 10:18:53 PM · #574 |
OK, Judy write one for Manny.
Photo By:Manny Librodo
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12/25/2005 10:48:33 PM · #575 |
the time of mist-
morning tide
lost in reality
dreams have died
heading out to no man's land
living on water
no place to stand
as I go through motions
with each day the same
i'm backwards, forwards
stuck , framed
all in a day's work
beginning to end
nothing goes differently
no change 'round the bend
so, mist that covers
pray shroud my soul
with hope and shelter
from this life's hell hole
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