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09/24/2005 12:54:19 PM · #1 |
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09/24/2005 01:22:02 PM · #2 |
| Man, what's to tear apart? It's beautiful. Congratulationns. |
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09/24/2005 01:24:17 PM · #3 |
| Only thing I will pick on is the flash back in the pupils. Other than that it's a nice portrait. |
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09/24/2005 01:24:45 PM · #4 |
Pretty girl, nice pose, nice capture, great focus on the eyes.
Lighting a bit too harsh for my taste and the hair could have done with a brush - unless the straggly bits are part of 'the look'
But great work. Wish I could take portraits like that.
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09/24/2005 02:05:31 PM · #5 |
| I'm not really good at tearing things apart, but one thing I do notice is the eyeshadow is soooo vivid & the rest of the image does not match. FUNK IT UP! ;0) |
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09/24/2005 02:16:00 PM · #6 |
| No way, this portrait is excellent. I love the pose, make-up and light. |
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09/24/2005 02:31:22 PM · #7 |
Magnificent fashion portrait. The lighting is spot on studio lighting, a bit too harsh in reality but made perfect by the cropping and somewhat diffused appreance. The pose is great and really goes well with the makeup, actually in a strange way it seems to highlight the pose. And it would be such a crime to play with it too much.
What can I say I'm a criminal ;-)
For romantics or classics.
For wild ones or those who like cross-processing as much as me.
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09/24/2005 02:32:07 PM · #8 |
Take two or three steps to your left -- bringing her shoulder in more would have prevent the fealing of leaning to the left I get. Other than that, the two things about the lighting that have already been mentioned -- it's a bit harsh and the catchlight directly in her pupil is distracting. Moving could help that, but the angle of the light would have helped it more.
But that is not to say I don't wish my portraits would come out this good. :D
David
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09/25/2005 12:40:38 PM · #9 |
Thanks for the feedback and comments...
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09/25/2005 02:38:30 PM · #10 |
I tend to agree with some of the comments already left. The lighting is a little harsh for my personal taste, but I love the crop and make-up and pose.
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09/25/2005 02:51:45 PM · #11 |
...oh - did you mean figuratively?? ;-) |
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09/26/2005 08:32:19 PM · #12 |
Originally posted by kpriest:
...oh - did you mean figuratively?? ;-) |
hahaha... that's graphic!
nice :)
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