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02/13/2005 07:23:45 PM · #1 |
She is a co-worker and really sweet. These were all taken in a skywalk. Heavy overcast sky. No flash or fill. They are my favorite three. It started getting dark to soon. Couldn't take more. She came up with the poses.
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02/13/2005 07:29:36 PM · #2 |
I like them, the last is my fav, I would crop a wee bit off the left tho.
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02/13/2005 08:37:25 PM · #3 |
I like the first and last best. Man, that first one just kills me. That's got some kind of chops. Love the context, the expression and the treatment you applied. Killer shot. Can you back off the brightness on the last one any at all without losing anything? It's got some great feeling with the turn of the head and the expression but it gets ever so close to blowing out the outline of her shoulder on the left side of the image. If not, I still like it as it sits.
The second image has some strong elements to it but I wish you'd caught her eyes open to get another shot at the intimate effect she brought to the first composition as I think that would temper the power of the non-horizontal shoulders (good job) and the head tilt. The tilt of the head along with the expression in the cheeks and mouth area give the effect of a little more weight in the face. This can be mitigated against by having the model raise her chin out toward the camera without effecting the solid effect that the tilt imparts to the face/body dynamic.
Nice set.
Kev
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02/13/2005 09:07:51 PM · #4 |
| My pp is causing the highlights to be to bright on the last one. I guess I'll do a straight from camera for her to. I forgot my glasses at her apartment so I was literally shooting these blind. Note to self...add a pair of glasses to camera bag. |
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02/13/2005 09:13:08 PM · #5 |
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