3-D City
by pitsaman

Comment:
hmmm Makes me wonder if this is a pitsaman work... Love this town!
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Christmas Elegance
by robbieh

Comment:
Pull the furniture out of the way and ya get 2 more points from me...
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red star lightning
by doginroom

Comment:
From the Critique Club

Wow this is the first time I've drawn a shot that has NO comments previously...

First let me say that I love the color tone here. Nice shadings of red complimented with the warm hues of the light bulbs!

This shot seems to suffer from a lack of focus in more ways than one. There doesn't seem to be any one spot in the shot that is really in focus. If you were shooting for a soft focus effect you ALMOST have it, but there doesn't seem to be a reason for it.

From a compositional point of view there is no subjective focus point here. There isn't a real place to look. There seems to be no real singular purpose for the shot. The shot is also (wierdly enough) kind of busy in a simple kind of way. There are a few too many competing lines trying to draw your attention to a non existant focal point...

One thing that you did do exceptionally well in my opinion was the exposure on the lights. It is right on without being over exposed at all!

Don't let the low score get ya down because I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work!
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As the World Turns
by dsidwell

Comment:
I would like to see what your EXIF data was for this. I like how you managed to get motion blur but can still read the captions. I also like how it looks like it has an atmosphere. Creative!
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Dino Dinner
by drgsoell

Comment:
You get bonus points for originality!!!
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Digital Action
by cimarron98

Comment:
You did capture action, and it is technically pretty good (focus, DOF, but lighting could be a little more imaginative) but it's not much to look at, not that interesting.
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Happiness is an Action word
by amsmyth

Comment:
I guess that technically you have captured something in action, but it ain't really an attractive sight...
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Samuel
by Jacko

Comment:
When he's older you can use this against him!!! (wink)
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New Paint
by Russell2566

Comment:
This seems a little flat (the bike itself) and dull. I think that fill lighting would help with the dull, not sure how to fix the flat part.
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The Duck Hunter/Senior Portrait
by boyte1

Comment:
Lighting is a little harsh here. A different time of day may help with that issue. Also I think that you need a little fill lighitng as it's hard to tell where subject ends and tree begins.
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