Telecommunication
by Dmaskeze

Comment:
Very busy shot with no real subject. My eye has no place to rest...
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Telling Secrets
by bobdaveant

Comment:
Excellent expression in the right models face! Great use of catchlights in her eyes. You are very overexposed though blowing out a lot of the detail in both the models tops. If you were shooting for a high key approach, you missed it by a smidge. I see this in the discolored background. Compositionally, the negative space to the right appears to off balance the shot. Cropping with a couple sheets of paper held up to my monitor, cutting off a third of the model on the left (say right behind her ear) and the dead space on the right makes a much cleaner composition with more oomph.
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Mi little garden gnome
by Lecra

Comment:
I'm not sure what is being communicated here. This shot has a very flat appearance and the colors are kinda dull. Did you use the on camera flash? If so, try shooting again without it. Preferably during early morning or late evening hours when the light is best. Playing with levels in photoshop or other editing software will help bring out the colors also.
Compositionally, the centered subject doesn't look like it is placed properly. An off centered compostion would help.
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Over & Out
by jjbeguin

Comment:
Don't really see any communicating going on here...
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Hey! How Do We Get a Wireless Phone?
by dswebb

Comment:
Wonderful idea and nice work by the models. It appears though that you took this during the worst possible time of day. If you shoot a scene like this a couple hours before sunset, won't have such harsh shadows, your colors won't wash out so bad and your models won't be squinting as much...
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From hand to hand
by Albireo

Comment:
What is this supposed to represent? Confused by the motion blur of the hand and the orange cast...
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Urban Communication
by flowergirl1110

Comment:
Too bad your skies look like mine do half the time... Nice vivid colors on the wall!
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Strings Attached
by taterbug

Comment:
Seriously thought this would do better dude... Can't believe I edged you out at the end! You gotta ten and I didn't...

Nice shot IMHO!
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The Walk
by L1

Comment:
Pretty cool shot hon! Makes me wonder what the kids are saying. Ya never know till it comes out of their mouth! Great tones and depth. Shots like this make me almost want to get out of the city...
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Edited to add: Before I clicked the post button, a song popped into my head... Pink Floyd, Time... Heesh I gotta make time...

Message edited by author 2004-10-09 04:58:33.

Aloft
by Brad

Comment:
This is quite simply an incredible B/W photograph! Though a little busy with all the lines and riggings, it's a perfectly fitting tribute to all those that were busy in time past WITH all those lines and riggings. Kudos on the third place finish!
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