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| 05/19/2006 12:18:29 AM |
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| 05/19/2006 12:17:45 AM |
En vert et roseby MambeComment: I'm confused by your choice of desat'ing the skin tones. It doesn't make sense to this viewer...
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| 05/19/2006 12:15:37 AM |
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| 05/17/2006 05:47:09 PM |
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Semper Paratusby island_girl1Comment: Needs more DOF to make the glove in focus. Is this your gear? If so, please accept my gratitude for your service!
Yours
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| 05/17/2006 05:29:01 PM |
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| 05/16/2006 11:39:17 PM |
Crescendoby greslizzzComment: From the Critique Club:
To me this looks like a very nice study type of shot. By that I mean you can shoot it over and over again and study how it comes out. That said:
What I like: You have some interesting contrasting lines here. The most obvious would be the vertical lines caused by the stems of the plants. More subtly, you have a neat diagonal line caused by the various heights of the plants. Put the two together and you have potential for a very interesting shot.
What I don't like: The pots at the bottom of the shot have no definition. They blend together. You can not tell where one pot ends and the next begins. The raindrops at the bottom of the window look like an oversight. Or in other words they look like you didn't notice them when taking the shot. If they were all over the window this would rock. As is it's a distraction. The reflections in the glass, see what I said about the raindrops. More reflections good! Less reflections good! As is: it looks like you didn't know they were there.
This has great potential. Figure out what you want it to finally look like and keep experimenting. You could end up with a shot that rocks!
Yours
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| 05/16/2006 09:24:01 PM |
Rhythmic Curvesby DigiFotoBuddyComment: From the Critique Club:
Wow... This is a very interesting shot. And definately right on challenge.
What I like: First of all, the rythm and repetition jump right out at you a slap you in the face! Very cool! Love the colors of the thing... What is it exactly? :-P Love the reflection: Is it on a mirror or a glass table? I think it's a table because of the line just above the object that has reflections and you can see through it also. Your DOF is awesome. You're a little soft at the top of the object where it goes out of frame but this is just a sniglet. Incredibly well done!
What I don't like: Well people have already said it over and over again, but your background definately detracts from and competes with the subject of the shot. Black background would have worked VERY well and possibly have moved this up into ribbon contention! Top right corner, your subject moves out of frame right in the corner. Bottom left it moves out of frame just above the corner. I keep wondering how it would have looked either moving the top right down in frame out of the corner. This would have given a touch cleaner line. Either that or move the bottom left down into the corner making a true diagonal.
Why didn't this score higher? I think your background was your downfall in this though 6.3 is still a damn good score!
Kudos
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