Has seen better days...
by TomCubis

Comment:
I do note that there actually isn't a window in the frame, but the intent is there so no issues with me. However I do find the overall crop and view to be a little incomplete. The steering wheel is just cut off, the orange mess is in the focus point, there just isn't something to grab the attention. Maybe a different angle on this could have really made it work.

another beautiful mess
by tate

Comment:
A good idea, but the overll effect does not work in the end. I just find the effect that the entire image is out of focus distracting............Maybe if the depth of field was a little greater, so that she was not as far out of focus, it may have worked a bit better.....

Somebody's Watching Me
by colorcarnival

Comment:
Perfect for this challenge. A really good image where the window makes the photograph, rather than being a distraction. The pporcessing for this is spot on, the overall dark feel perfect. Really like the crop as well. The light from the top right of the window is really good, adding to the effect as well and the overall lighting.......Nothing to suggest cause I think you got this pretty much spot on..........well done

Classic case of the smush face.
by abranton

Comment:
The centred composition for me doesn't work. She is looking to the right, to nothing. The bands from the door, framming etc causes seperation in the photo which also effects the overall photo

drive-by
by tnun

Comment:
I don't feel that the car window, or mirrow, add to the photo. The subjects are small, hidden and merge into the background.

Country Store
by dtremain

Comment:
Ok.......Firstly, the gold border I find is a distraction. The white band on the left and top is even more so. Both jump out, rather than just compliment the photo, so neither work for me. The clutter of a country store is always there, but is not something that really works for this photo. There are so many things competing for my interest, so much so that the window areas are not primary subjects here. The centred line of baskets dows not work. It is too central, and leads to nowhere, just more clutter......There are also overexposed areas, and the colours really dont work well.....

Drowning in Progress
by bspurgeon

Comment:
Not really sure that the window frame really adds to the overall photo. The black and white processing does work well here. You have both true white and black, without large overexposed areas, which is always the challenge in these photos. The large sky area does not quite have the interest to really take up this much of the photo, as the subjects, the cranes, are pretty small here........

eye in the sky
by skewsme

Comment:
The connection to the topic is clear. The overlaid image effect is interesting, but creates a messy image, where the eye does not know where to look on the page, but also what depth it should be focussed at. Should I be concentrating on the window, the fence, the trees, the sky.........but it also is appealling on a different level, while other images are following the rules, this breaks most of them, and creates a much more complex image...........

Windows 2000
by hotpasta

Comment:
Ahhh. Makes me think of home........A shame that you didn't have blue sky to really show up against the Melbourne Central Cone........The Shot Tower in from the side helps lead the eyes into the great Geometric shapes that the cone produces.......Really like the border that you have on this as well....Adds to the geometric effect of the whole image.........

Burnt Tree at Running Creek
by vlado

Comment:
Congrats Vlado on the Top 10 FS finish and PB.......Great Photo Vlado!!!