Diese wird eine gute Nacht sein
by molly12341

Comment:
I felt that the colors were blown out. It's almost like you wanted the silhouette, then chickened out.

Peek-a-Boo
by FocusPoint

Comment:
I had a problem with the lighting. Everything draws my eye to the nose, which is in focus, so I guess that's ok. But I would have liked to see more eyes.

Peeking for Eternity
by RulerZigzag

Comment:
I really like that the telescope is the focus here. It would have been easy to focus on the person.

Lava Fields
by darnold

Comment:
Great shot! Just not sure it fits in this challenge. This would be a fantastic free study.

Peek-a-Boo in blues
by hajeka

Comment:
Very creative! Seems a wee bit oof around the horns. The atonality is great. BTW, where did you find smurfs? I haven't seen them in years.

Peking through the fence
by sfmorris

Comment:
Did you ecperiment with dof? There does not seem to be much dimension here.

we hide from the vehicles
by e301

Comment:
Intersting editorial story in this.

Peek-a-Boo
by androgeus

Comment:
Colors are great. There's nothing that is inherently wrong with this, imo. I just don't feel it. Art speaks differently to different people.

Peeking Between the Rails
by MaryO

Comment:
This just makes me happy to be alive. :)

Wanna Peek?
by dsmil

Comment:
Very nice idea with the crepey-silky cloth back-lit to show the body profile behind the drape. Great color scheme, the red vs the ivory skin tone, against the neutral blue/gray. What keeps this from being really elegant is the angle of the model's head and the make-up and hair. Sometimes design has to take you all the way into dictating what stands before you. I like the "fly-away" strands, but the rest of the hair is pulled back too tightly. A softer bun or free falling hair with a fan blowing it back would be better. The make-up is too harsh for the softness of everything else. Less mascara, no false eyelashes, lighter lip gloss. The green shadow could work if everything else was toned down. (Or go the complete opposite...make EVERYTHING above the neck angular, severe and over the top...slick the hair completely back, go even darker with the make-up etc.) What you have here is the beginnings of a GREAT fashion photo, that is being held back by a portrait. If that makes sense.