When The Dolls Awake...
by fleenk

Comment:
a broken doll always seems to have that un-hinging feeling to me. I like your use of colors and the artistic way you set this up. The DOF IMO could have been a little wider to have kept the dolls forehead in focus. still a nice shot.7

Tied to the Tracks!!!!!!!!!
by boyte1

Comment:
A fun shot! the model has done a fine job with her expression and the light that is coming from the right of the image makes for a feeling of movment and inpending doom.Nice job with the contrast and use of B&W. 7

Panic
by JenHall

Comment:
This is a great shot, I can feel the panic. I wonder how this would have felt if more of the young girl could have been seen? or if the image were centered. The light on the floor also helps to pull you in to the picture. Overall I like this shot. Good Luck! 7

Movie House
by Artifacts

Comment:
I do not get dream or nightmare from this shot:( unless you are the poor soul that has to clean the gum from under the seats:) just to much of a reach..sorry 4

lost in the golden labyrinth
by tp-fcp

Comment:
It is a nice picture of a hall, but it needs to much help from the title and I do not get the feeling of a maze. I think to have rotated the image about 1 degree clockwize would have helped or rotating it 45 degrees counter clockwize to give a feeling of off balance. hope this helped 5

Sprite Attacks
by Chilly0999

Comment:
Kids can be so much fun:) this is a great shot...I hope I am not out of line saying I see humor in it. but on the other side i love how the eyes are so black and I think the low level of hue works as well...I would have liked to have seen the end of her right hand or what she was holding out. Overall a nice idea 7

Black Hole
by justine

Comment:
Wow! great image! I like the use of sepia here. the movment confined to the center of the shot also works for me. what might have been even more fun would have been for the model to have moved from the image for the last couple seconds of the shot and have had a fire going to give it even more action. Just the same, I had rated it a 7 but coming through and offering a comment I think more a 9. good luck:)

Dream Baby Dream
by train

Comment:
very fun image. I see the use of a flash? did you try to take this with just natural light? I wonder if you might have gotten a little more depth out of the image that way. I still think it is a good take on the challenge. 7

A Mother's Worst Nightmare
by Shannon

Comment:
Nice use of "Low key" Photography. I think this would have worked better for me if it had been just a tad lighter...maybe more distinction of the child. still I like. Good Luck! 7

He never came!
by kiwiness

Comment:
A sad image:( I feel her pain and anguish. a nightmare for any young lady left at the altar. 7