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| 06/28/2008 01:15:42 PM |
Shh, Don't Tellby enajjComment: Originally posted by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, the diagonal you establish betwee the lid and the hand is good. It gives a definitive "line" to the shot, and adds a bit of interest or action to it. That said, the straight on perspective makes the shot seem a bit static. The lower perspective is better, I think, than one that is even, but perhaps if it were "turned" some, more dof could be defined, and it would have more depth to it. Also, it feel a bit tilted to the right to me.
Technically, you have done well with exposing the glass correctly. That can be difficult. the hand and the lid, though, appear to be just a touch off. That makes the shot have the impression that it is out of focus, because the two "anchor" points are not crisp. Overall, it feels like a touch more contrast would also help it to be a bit more dynamic.
Overall, I think you did meet the challenge, though arguably, stealing a cookie isn't a crime (unless you are shoplifting it), but the idea was good, and it was kinda nice to not see all blood, gore and violence.
Good work and best to you in future challenges.
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It is nice to see such detailed analysis. That wd encourage the youngster to keep doing better. Tnx. |
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| 06/25/2008 06:18:13 AM |
Shh, Don't Tellby enajjComment: They say "caught red handed". Here the grass reflection gives the had a green shade! But I like the concept and the humor behind the shot. Goes to my fav! |
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| 06/21/2008 12:10:00 PM |
Espresso Explosion by todbedyComment: Oil prices are exploding! This one should make the symbolic shot for any headline on the subject. Great shot! Congrats on the blue! Message edited by author 2008-06-21 12:10:25. |
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| 06/21/2008 11:55:46 AM |
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| 06/21/2008 11:34:50 AM |
Water Chemistry by IreneMComment: Fascinating image! Congrats Irene. I am not surprised. With liquids as teh subject i guess you are never far too away from the ribbons! |
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