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Shadow Dunes II
08/16/2004 05:56:20 PM
Shadow Dunes II
by Elemmennope

Comment:
I prefer this one over the other. The other shot has too many distractions in the sand itself like dead plant matter. This one seems relatively void of such imperfections. I also like the background better here with the water and the birds in V formation. Although it seems difficult to tell if the horizon is level due to the mountains and water, it looks level. I'd tinker around with levels and curves to maximize contrast and maybe clone out the odd bits and ends in the sand. One more suggestion: try this in b/w or some other duotone. Sometimes the best nature shots, or shots in general, look much better in b/w.

Otherwise, great shots and keep up the good work! I wish I had access to dunes like these but I have stuff like the Walt Disney Concert Hall, sheesh. :)
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Old Port
08/14/2004 03:43:04 AM
Old Port
by belette

Comment:
Nice contrast of old and new architecture to make your vanishing point. Colors seem bland and lack punch and depth.
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Eternal Bond
08/14/2004 03:41:05 AM
Eternal Bond
by RudyC310

Comment:
I don't see the converging parallel lines producing a vanishing point or at least hinting at one.
St Kilda Pier at night
08/14/2004 03:39:42 AM
St Kilda Pier at night
by mandyp

Comment:
The lamps seems to distract me from the main purpose of this image and so does the puddle with the bright highlights. Once I get past that, the vanishing point is apparent and executed nicely. Focus seems to be off a bit.
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Country Road Take Me Home....
08/14/2004 03:37:46 AM
Country Road Take Me Home....
by Mona

Comment:
Interesting take on the challenge! I like this twist on the concept and I think it works very well. However, you seem to have over sharpened by quite a lot and it shows in the overprocessed highlights throughout the image as well as the unusually sharp edges of the tree leaves. Experiment with varying heights (vantage points) to see what works best vs only taking at standing eye level.
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Countryscape
08/14/2004 03:33:13 AM
Countryscape
by GolferDDS

Comment:
Well cropped and implemented. I think it might have been more dramatic if you were a bit lower and closer to the fence therefore the fence coming from behind the camera, past the camera and far in front into the vanishing point. Focus seems a bit fuzzy, too.
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Where do those lines ACTUALLY converge...
08/14/2004 03:29:02 AM
Where do those lines ACTUALLY converge...
by huggablemike

Comment:
No parallel lines to demonstrate a vanishing point.
Can't see the forest for the trees
08/11/2004 08:10:31 PM
Can't see the forest for the trees
by cwyou

Comment:
Such a shame that this photo is so poorly focused. I really liked the thumbnail and was excited to look at the full image. Contrast is also off and the right side and bottom could be cropped a bit more.
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Reach
08/11/2004 08:04:22 PM
Reach
by Jesuispeure

Comment:
Instead of tilting the camera to take this picture, maybe sit on the ground at the front door and shoot directly up towards the spires. If you have a wide enough angle lens, you might get both and maybe even get them appear to bend towards each other thus creating your vanishing point. I do see what you were thinking here but it's not quite as effective. Maybe my idea isn't either.
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Converging Clouds
08/11/2004 08:00:44 PM
Converging Clouds
by GBServis

Comment:
A bit overexposed but the principle is there with the converging lines. My eyes drift towards the right top cloud more than look at the lines of the buildings.
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