Sunshine
by nards656

Comment:
Good lighting good skin tones
i like the composition of the shot

Still My Favorite Mountains
by dsidwell

Comment:
Great shot David! The tone in this shot is amazing. Congrats on the ribbon ... Beautiful

I feel manipulated
by holiday

Comment:
Nice work here ... I like the way the hands frame your model. Great lighting and contrast ... good luck

Portrait of a Victorian Angel
by Jaded_Housewife

Comment:
A great setup and technically a flawless portrait. She is beautiful.
This is one of my favs in the challenge... what can I say, I have this thing for angels :D ... good luck

My Baby Girl
by brettt83

Comment:
This is a lovely portrait, with a nice focus on her eyes. (Here comes my 2 cents) I would adjust your lighting or the position of your model in such a way as to have the brightness of her face at least 1 to 2 stops higher than your background. I think this would give this shot more depth, and it would help to make it a stronger image than it already is. Good luck in the challenge

eight
by bucket

Comment:
So cool ! I bet this guy loves this shot. It is an awesome portrait that has great lighting and strong compositional elements ... well done

...to the soul
by thegrandwazoo

Comment:
A beautiful portrait... skintone,focus on the eyes, lighting, makeup, framing, all are bang on. I hope this does well ... one of my favs in a very busy challenge ... good luck

Luna
by Nazgul

Comment:
This shot should do well. Good light, contrast, focus, a beautiful model. It is great that there is a story (somewhat) in the shot ... well done

Egyptian Kid
by karimelsahy

Comment:
I like this shot ... nice contrast ... cute model.
Try this... Crop tight on left to leave it less centered and tighter on the face maybe around the scarf height. More detail is better :) Good luck

Chimney Sweep
by NerdJNerdBird

Comment:
Grit is good ... great shot hope this does well ... truly the best in challenge!