Rusty home, rusty eyes
by rkoynova

Comment:
This looks a bit washed out and grainy. The detail in the birds should pop more.

Blue Rust
by dsray

Comment:
Nice use of a framing device. Good color. Could use a bit more detail in the rust.

Lust
by galaxyz

Comment:
The washed out detail and out of focus rods in the foreground pretty much ruin this shot. I don't get the title.

Going Nowhere
by beclo

Comment:
Kind of washed out and bland. This isn't a particularly interesting compositon.

The Nature of Rust
by dagaleaa

Comment:
I don't like the harsh shadows the leaves cast. It looks like the result of flash. I'm not crazy about the composition.

Decaying Farm
by Polar7

Comment:
This is a beautiful old barn. There's nothing really wrong with this composition. It's a nice rural landscape. But I'd be inclined to close in on the section with the door and the window.

Rusted Across
by BooZon

Comment:
Kind of boring. I don't like the way the frame is divided into four sections of bland color.

decay
by fluxn

Comment:
This is not a great perspective for this subject.

Old Lock
by vtruan

Comment:
Way too high key for me. The strong contrast emphasizes the hot spots in the left corners and on the lock.

Birds of a Feather.... Rust Together
by amylyn

Comment:
This is a cool rusted item but this dead on perspective doesn't capture the liveliness of the sculpture. That background is plain boring and it takes up the bulk of the frame. It looks like you were too concerned with getting the entire sculpture in the shot. That's not necessary to make a powerful statement. The only reason you would need to have the whole bird in the shot is for pure representational documenting.