King Bondo
by trying2bstill

Comment:
It looks like there are three chairs bonded to his shoulder. If the lighting was a bit better on the chair he is sitting on it would connect the row of chairs and look less like the other ones are growing from his shoulder. Overall, it's a nice portrait.

Janet
by redmoon

Comment:
The model is pretty and has great coloring. Nice background. I just feel that her face is a bit distorted. It looks like you came in very close with a normal or slightly wide angle lens.

Mr. Matt
by postoakinversion

Comment:
His jaw looks wired shut. The lighting and background are very good. The model needs to look a bit more relaxed.

Innocence
by mariomel

Comment:
She is a very cute kid but her hair looks either greasy or wet. Next time, I would suggest waiting untlil her hair dries or using less hair product. The capture of her eyes is very nice and her lips look natural.

Kat
by rubyrednails

Comment:
She's a bit too close to the background. Next time, try having the model stand about a foot away from the background. To avoid the shadows you can direct a seperate light at the background.

flirtaceous.
by theodor38

Comment:
I think your perspective is a bit off. The nose is quite a bit distorted. Judging by the angle of the shoulder and the wierd distortion, it looks like maybe a self-portrait done with a hand-held camera. If this is the case, I would suggest a tripod (or anything you can set the camera up on) and the timer button. The lighting is good and the model is appealing (except for the distorted features).

Roger the Plumber
by biggood53

Comment:
Looks like his shirt is in sharper focus than his face. I like the quality of the light and the background.

Low-Key Rembrant Light
by JoelHSmith

Comment:
"..and I would have gotten away with it, too, if weren't for those meddlin' kids..."

Very highschool yearbook looking--not too imaginative--but it looks like you know how to light this kind of portrait. His stare is a bit fixed and unnatural looking--just like in a yearbook.

Mayor of Dogville
by ellamay

Comment:
Next time, try focusing on the eyes. They look like empty sockets--very spooky. I don't really like that his ears are folded back. That's just weird.

Troy
by Mick

Comment:
Nice crotch. Seriously, you may want to reconsider your cropping on this one. The lighting and bacground is decent though. Also, he looks a little red-eyed.