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| 10/01/2006 06:54:36 PM |
September Rainby AlainComment: Quite well composed - although the out of focus echo of the tall stands on the right side is probably unfortunate - it draws the eye too far out of frame for good effect, I think. |
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| 09/30/2006 05:40:23 PM |
Droplets after rainby ionelpopComment: Pretty - and a great sense of detail too. Given the rigidity of the composition, that small element top left is a touch unsettling, but not major really. I like the angular plane of the focus. Not a shot that makes one catch one's breath - but you can't shoot them all the time, can you? |
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| 09/30/2006 05:38:16 PM |
It's comingby iianComment: Nice exposure, and there's certainly drama there. One would, of course, like to see more formal elements than simple clouds - this is perhaps too much of a wallpaper, rather than a more engaging image. |
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| 09/30/2006 05:36:17 PM |
Destination Storm Drainby just_meComment: Nice shot - just doesn't quite have the 'ping' that's needed 'round here; a little more colour saturation, and a little cleaner a composition and I think you might have had a hit on your hands. The drain and the swirl of water just don't sit comfortably in frame - it's a bit too close to a simple half-and-half composition, and perhaps a more 'obvious' use of the diagonal line of the frame would have given this more impact. Still, nice work. |
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| 09/27/2006 09:43:57 PM |
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| 09/27/2006 09:42:43 PM |
cliche #28by taseComment: I like the prgressive contrast against the bar of light - the sudden reversal; perhaps you might have made more of that? It seems so relegated in this composition. Good detail though, and sense of fragility. |
| 09/27/2006 09:41:35 PM |
Flower in the rainby KaveranComment: I like the idea, i think - compositionally, though I'm not sure you've quite pulled it off - perhaps the flower's structure just isn't regular enough for the image to handle this partial treatment; that trick usually seems to depend on the viewer having the impression that the object is so regular there is simply no point in including the rest of it. I think also there's something amiss with the intensity of these colours - over saturation, or simply over-exposure (I'm sure you could have exposed a stop less and had more impact)? The pink certainly becomes kind of messy and indistinct toward the centre of the flower. |
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| 09/27/2006 09:38:33 PM |
w!nston !n the ra!nby annasenseComment: Nice work - especially the lead going out of frame, given a parallel dynamic by the line of the path. |
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| 09/27/2006 09:37:02 PM |
slow escapeby saintaugustComment: Nice shooting. I like the dynamic, and for once someone has used the out of focus distortions of rain on window rather than simply focussing on the drops. it lends a mystery and sadness top the lines of those bricks and trees. |
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| 09/27/2006 09:35:21 PM |
Dripping Wet Bikeby lifternessjtComment: Good tones, good detail, and exposure is spot on. I don't find any sense of compositional structure in it, though: nothing to balance that corner of grass, but the reflected light in the negative space areas helps with the impression of an overcast day: but you have that already in the cap-stones on the wall. Better than most so far, though. |
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