Exercise
by pamelasue

Comment:
Well lit still life; I wonder if you mightn't have made more of the composition though: the lines of this are quite flat and straightforward.

The Long Delayed Deck Repair
by EssAreDubya

Comment:
Can't help thinking that the maze of angles and lines you had available here might have made fro an interesting composition: this seems like a standard viewpoint, snapshot.

Is it too late for the self portrait challenge???
by lauraodom

Comment:
Fun image. My only note might be lightening of the hair a touch, just to show the movement in it.

Staircase Children
by hannka

Comment:
I don't see the relevance to the challenge, but i like the strangeness of it

The Dive
by SDW

Comment:
Stillness and motion - and the winged composition works well for the shot too.

the escape
by betelgeuse

Comment:
Very interesting approach to the challenge: disturbed only by the suspicion that it isn't absolutely centred. That's not a a 'does not meet challenge' comment beloved of the masses - but in a composition that relies entirely on the graphic, as this silhouette does, the absolute balance of that geometry has so much more importance. I think this should be cropped square, and the squirrel lowered and moved right a touch in frame. That could all be an optical illusion though, but I suspect not ...

Standing Guard
by razor093

Comment:
Seems to lack decent contrast; no blacks, and the emphasis of shapes would require that to my eye. In general, its over-exposed, which removes the impact of the colours from the image.

Level Crossing
by darasbulba

Comment:
Are you sure about the balance of those lines within frame? And the tilt to the overall image? I can't myself see a use for it, and it draws the attention away from the composition into a working-out of what it is that feels wrong.

Silk Fowl
by sgeorge

Comment:
Love these animals: chickens with trousers.

MIDWINTER SCULPTURE
by korpen

Comment:
Marvellous detail and technicals. I'm unsure about including the horizon - unneccesary complication to a simple composition?