out for a skate...
by ralph

Comment:
Something compositionally discomforts me here; perhaps that she seems to have no space to move into. Whilst the intriguing bokeh and motion in that background is interesting, she - because of the focus - remains the true subject and you've relegated her somewhat. As to the grain ... I'm not sure what it adds to this, why it's relevant.

the Inner Pain
by Muppet

Comment:
One always feels that dark images benefit better from the use of grain - simply because it was always high speed film where one saw that, I'm sure. The negative space seems a touch overwhelming here, and the title and suggestions of the pose ... well, a little pretentious I'm afraid. The light on the wall is effective though, suggestive of prison, of captivity.

waiting for the train.. ISO 1600
by kandykarml

Comment:
I wish you didn't find it necessary to include your ISO on your title. The graininess certainly enhances the fell here, and the tilt of the image adds a dynamic that's effective. It could perhaps use more contrast - a stronger sense of the dark, and for a really effective image I would say it is too cluttered along that line of the lightposts - the signs, the seats, the vehicles, the buildings confuse the sense of simplicity that exists in the right side of the image.

spirited dance
by Donald

Comment:
Extraordinary image - but you'll be hammered for entering it in this challenge I fear. make it black and white, too - it will emphasise the sense of motion without the distraction of the colours.

Bad dream
by scotthadl

Comment:
In such a smooth, almost rendered feeling image, a couple of little detail really bug my eye - the scoop or whatever below the nose, and the highlight on the left ear - particularly against the black background. The bottom left, the body of the mannequin, also makes the image too busy, in what might have been the more effective for being a simple as possible. The sense of grain suits absolutely though - adding a subtlety of texture to what might otherwise have been simply too smooth, too plastic an image.

It's perhaps the two lightsources that actually upset the purity of this composition. So simple that any extra confusion makes for unneccesary feeling of addition.

Good Old-Fashioned Housekeeping
by mfiman

Comment:
A kind of confusing image: it has good points, and then strangely poor elements out of keeping with the overall feel of it. The sheer blackness and lack of detail in the brush, and yet the sense of pose in the feet/ankles. The decent light on the shapes of the legs, and the poor reflections on the floor. Why it should seem particularly suited to a grainy look I don't know. It hints at a film noir contrast and feel, but then presents this very domestic - even if dated - scene. Interesting, but for me, in the end, not quite successful.

Given up
by oskar

Comment:
Good use of the technique - the depth of field and tilt to enhance the composition work well. It suffers, for me, from the usual problem with chess shots, of seeming portentously meaningful, freighted with messages, effortfully significant; whilst it actually lacks humanity, both in subject and in sense, I feel. I suspect it'll score reasonably well.

The look
by xantangummi

Comment:
Certainly a mood captured here, and the noise works well with the image, rather than seeming simply overlaid. The difficult balance between detail and grain perhaps lets it down a touch for me - in a sense its neither one thing nor the other - not enough interference to approach the abstract, and yet not enough sense of detailed change of light to approach the realistic.

Tree Grain
by FujiPortal

Comment:
Quite a plain image, quite everyday. Perhaps especially in colour. I appreciate your more subtle use of grain/noise, but I'm unsure that this is particularly enhanced by that, and unsure that its a scene/image/composition that will grab many folks' attention. In a sense, you set yourself an even harder challenge by taking such an ordinary subject.

Ready to Ride
by dahved

Comment:
I don't think, for myself, that a bright shiny subject is particularly enhanced by the sense of dirtiness and rough texture that the grain brings to it. The impression one is left with is of an overlay of noise, rather than a co-operative part of the image.