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SkinStone
02/19/2004 05:06:50 AM
SkinStone
by sergut

Comment:
Rather a good photograph. Semi-naked man's arm appearing from black woman's head is odd seeming, but in a slightly surreal image like this it doesn't offend me. Oh to dodge and burn a touch though - compositionally, that near-silhouette pulls the eye so strongly, and she (he?), being not quite silhouetted my eye is searching for detail there that is difficult to see - kind of unsettling, but not in a good sense. Like it though - softness of toning on the walls through the door add a great sense of marble, and rich stone-work, and then that oddly posed figure to add some more disruption. Almost great.
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The Hidden Face
02/19/2004 04:58:46 AM
The Hidden Face
by torrenzano

Comment:
Took some looking to see it, and only when I focussed on that darker line of shade in the water did it come to me - I was looking for something larger. I like this composition - like the movement through the frame produced by the rush of water and the lines of the fir tree, and I also like the tonality. The 'point' of the shot, especially given your title, doesn't seem to be a texture though, which makes it an odd thing to submit to this challenge, perhaps. There is perhaps some suggestion of tactility in the water, but only at a stretch.
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Palm Surface
02/19/2004 04:55:10 AM
Palm Surface
by Bupu

Comment:
The movement from light to shade, and the broken nature of that surface is well captured. Photographically, a difficult composition - one's eye searches for patterns in near-abstract images such as this, and there is a sense of two stonger horizontal lines in this surface, but they lead me only to the silhouetted edge of the tree - I think I'd have tried a wider aspect ratio thatn this 4:3, to bring those lines closer to top of frame, then the combined lines of the edge and those two would produce a triangular feel with the brighter area of bark: might (only might) find that the eye moved through that more happily.
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Maximum Destruction
02/19/2004 04:50:22 AM
Maximum Destruction
by blhawk7

Comment:
Good capture, good motion-stopping, focus, etc. Some sense of texture in the sand, but compositionally entirely naive - subject dead centre, no sense of how the viewer's eye might move through frame. Seems presented entirely because it was a difficult capture.
Shaggy
02/19/2004 04:47:40 AM
Shaggy
by neilmwilson

Comment:
As with almost all animal shots, the immediate point of interest for the viewer's eye is the subject's eye - it's almost a photographic maxim that so long as the eye is in focus it doesn't matter too much about the rest of the subject. Shooting it half-masked like this produces a sense of confusion, I think. Along the line of the nose, and some of that fringe there is certainly a sense of texture, but your composition of this has unbalanced that, for me, and i find my eye wandering through the frame without finding a point to hold it.
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Untitled
02/19/2004 04:43:22 AM
Untitled
by Nukkta

Comment:
Little variation in light across the in-focus areas of the hat - leaves little impression of the feel of the surface. The out of focus line of the brim where it curls up really pulls the eye, to poor effect I fear. There is far more texture visible in the extreme top right of frame, but your composition has relegated that area so far that it barely registers without a deliberate search.
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Oxidation
02/19/2004 04:40:17 AM
Oxidation
by Quadrajet

Comment:
Interesting choice of subject for this challenge, certainly. There's an odd sensation of there being a lack of detail in this, though close inspection reveals that there is no significant processing or pixelation going on: I think it's to do with the light you've chosen. This has the feel of a very uniform light, like an overcast day when there are no real shadows: something more directional, even if it were soft, would bring out the texture of the rust more - would produce those small shadows that the eye percieves as texture. Here, you have good work on tones and shapes, but little feel of the quality of those surfaces. I also find this a touch random compositionally.
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DesertRose
02/19/2004 04:34:00 AM
DesertRose
by jferreira

Comment:
This appears more focussed on the background than the rose - which has caught some texture there, at least. The rose is not completely out, of course, just a little beyond the range of acceptably sharp, for me. Also, there is no composition here - you've just plonked the thing down. or put your camera right over it, so that it's completely centre-of-frame; no context, nothing to balance it. If it were a genuinely interesting shape, or more striking to look at, that might work - but that confusion of planes and angles, especially with the lack of detail, leads to - well, confusion, only.
The Anger Builds Up
02/18/2004 03:51:54 PM
The Anger Builds Up
by r0yal

Comment:
Don't see texture here - no sensation of feel, of a tactile surface, of graduation of smoothness and roughness. Intriguing subject that this is - and fine illustration of an iris (and the extreme colouring is very interesting) - I think it out of place in a challenge of this title.
Scaly
02/18/2004 03:49:21 PM
Scaly
by illywikiniky

Comment:
Very little sense of light and shade within the actual subject - it all seems lit the same, which almost by definition removes any great sensation of texture. The reflection of the sunlight also seems a bit odd. If you were to photograph this from an angle, so that the sun is not directly behind you, you might find that the unevenness of the surface is emphasised more by the light slanting across it. This way, the very small areas of shade that are created by that slanting light, and that are the things we see as 'texture', are not visible.
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