Contemplation
by waterlilies

Comment:
good potential but really looks underexposed by about a stop or so

Sheridan
by gajmaj

Comment:
great high key style portrait - the eyes look unnaturally brown/ orange though

Carmela Viola
by johnm

Comment:
love it - plenty of personality, great lighting - cool shot.

Her eyes
by Miinerva

Comment:
Your processing has almost removed all the detail from her eyes - giving big black pools - could be what you are going for - but the title seems to contradict that

Ponderous
by dagills22191

Comment:
the leading arm towards the camera makes it look much heavier than it probably is. Not convinced that the hair position helps her either - particularly as it dissappears in to the background and appears on the table too - looks like some of it has almost been cut off and ended up lying on the table - some better arrangement might have been more flattering

Sam
by rhipster

Comment:
Very even, soft lighting - over all feel is a touch flat/ lacking in contrast though. Arm placement feels a little uncomfortable, crossing/ cutting the right arm in particular

Kelly
by Tallbloke

Comment:
really needs some more light to balance out your main source - the shadows on the cheek and eye sockets and under the hair could do with some balancing

Lady in red
by asij

Comment:
the props are a good attempt to make this more interesting, but the light from the single source below left is pretty harsh - underexposing a lot of the background and giving you pretty strong shadows that don't do much for me

Alicia
by jodiecoston

Comment:
interesting composition/ pose - though her eyes could maybe be a bit more open ? The hair sweeping around her neck unfortunately looks like it might have been growing from there - something to pay a bit more attention to perhaps but a lot of potential

I can hear music
by RUEDISCHMUTZ

Comment:
fun shot, good catchlights too and a great smile