Handwritten
by betsypdx

Comment:
Your use of stationery is secondary in the composition of this image. This could hurt you in the scoring. I would have liked to have seen this with a different background color to better emphasis the paper. Overall, a very well done image.

Writing Upon Flesh
by otisXmike

Comment:
I assume this is a work in progress, as there is very little color with work done on the back. I like the lighting and the background but her upper hip breaks the contour of the body. Perhaps if her legs were straightened some it would help continue the flow.

spiral slide
by Rikki

Comment:
Great angle and lighting. This would have really popped if shot with a black background.

Focused
by JPetraliaX

Comment:
The word are the primary focus of this compostion and will probably cause several voters to ding you for it. The image is technically sound and well done.

Paper airplane
by pinbokeshatta

Comment:
I like the overall composition of this image. I'm not quite sure what that is next to the airplane on the left. An apple stem? This distracts from the main focus of the composition.

From the desk of...
by dockie

Comment:
The blues in this image are very pleasing but I would have liked to have seen the paper a little whiter. Nicely done overall but it doesn't have that "I wish I had taken that image" appeal to it.

He Tried To Put A Lid On It
by Tap10

Comment:
Interesting concept. The lighting on this photo leaves it a little flat looking. If you could have moved the markers away from the background some it would produce better defined shadows and help give the photo more depth. Another method would be to move the light to the right hand side of the pink marker instead of primarily straight on.

The Answer
by scarbrd

Comment:
Nice effect of the lighting through the pen holder. I would like to see the out of focus portion of the pen holder in a different position, as my eye is drawn to it after reading the message.

Tsuru
by pidge

Comment:
Nice arrangement. I would like to have seen the colors in the cranes a bit more saturated.

Dear Mom
by vprndsg

Comment:
The B&W conversion is very effective and well executed. I wonder how this would look with a little more noise to similute film grain.